for my life from here on out2/22/2021 c5 Guest
Shame you didn’t continue one of the better ideas
Shame you didn’t continue one of the better ideas
6/30/2012 c6 vampiregirl2014
Amen girl. If ir not mature enough and complain about the stories that r rated M THEN DONT FUC*ING READ THEM! IT HAS RATED M ON THERE FOR A REASON! AND IF I RECALL U WAS U FANFICTION WHO PUT THE RATTIG BUTTON ON THERE FPR PEOPLE TO USE AND FOR THOSE PEOPLE WHO DONT LIKE VIOLENCE! SO PEOPLE START READING THE RATING AND STOP BIT*HING!
Amen girl. If ir not mature enough and complain about the stories that r rated M THEN DONT FUC*ING READ THEM! IT HAS RATED M ON THERE FOR A REASON! AND IF I RECALL U WAS U FANFICTION WHO PUT THE RATTIG BUTTON ON THERE FPR PEOPLE TO USE AND FOR THOSE PEOPLE WHO DONT LIKE VIOLENCE! SO PEOPLE START READING THE RATING AND STOP BIT*HING!
6/22/2012 c6 
10Sami365
I totally agree, things are just getting plain ridiculous on here. I'm gonna check out that website. Lets hope that things get better on here.
10Sami365I totally agree, things are just getting plain ridiculous on here. I'm gonna check out that website. Lets hope that things get better on here.
7/27/2011 c5 VampireAcademyRocks0726
OMG awesome story... i hope u can continue soon :)
OMG awesome story... i hope u can continue soon :)
6/2/2011 c1 6booksloveandcoffee
It's good but it could be so much better.
You might want to get a beta, someone that proof reads your chapters to check for spelling, grammar, and provides words or phrases that sound better than what you have. Poor spelling and grammar can be what turns away a potential reader.
You also should consider spacing out your paragraphs because having one big blob can really turn off a lot of readers, which I'm sure you don't want.
My email is if you want someone to beta.
6booksloveandcoffeeIt's good but it could be so much better.
You might want to get a beta, someone that proof reads your chapters to check for spelling, grammar, and provides words or phrases that sound better than what you have. Poor spelling and grammar can be what turns away a potential reader.
You also should consider spacing out your paragraphs because having one big blob can really turn off a lot of readers, which I'm sure you don't want.
My email is if you want someone to beta.
5/24/2011 c1 choyo
Ur story seems like it will be pretty gud. But it wud be nice if u space out ur paragraphs & uesd more puncuations & quotations. Ur sentences seem to run together
Ur story seems like it will be pretty gud. But it wud be nice if u space out ur paragraphs & uesd more puncuations & quotations. Ur sentences seem to run together