
2/18/2013 c1 Hey There
It needs to be longer but good.
It needs to be longer but good.
4/19/2011 c1
5sayfriendandenter
Awwwww! So cute! The end. Just kidding! But, seriously, I really like it. Could have been a bit longer, but if it feels like you have to strech it out, it usually results in the story sounding forced and strange. But yeah, I loovvveeee me some Eclare :) And I love how Eil's biggest asset can also be his biggest downfall. He can be way too overprotective, but that's what makes him him, yes? Great story!
livelaughlove,
kitty ^.^

Awwwww! So cute! The end. Just kidding! But, seriously, I really like it. Could have been a bit longer, but if it feels like you have to strech it out, it usually results in the story sounding forced and strange. But yeah, I loovvveeee me some Eclare :) And I love how Eil's biggest asset can also be his biggest downfall. He can be way too overprotective, but that's what makes him him, yes? Great story!
livelaughlove,
kitty ^.^
4/13/2011 c1
25JDDCdancer1497
It was good but way too short. I didn't feel like this story should have ended here. If you are keeping this at a oneshot then it really needs to be longer. Now I know some oneshot are short but this idea for a story really deserves more dialogue. It was good other than that though.

It was good but way too short. I didn't feel like this story should have ended here. If you are keeping this at a oneshot then it really needs to be longer. Now I know some oneshot are short but this idea for a story really deserves more dialogue. It was good other than that though.