for Family Issues3/3/2014 c1 fanofmany
good start keep up the good work
good start keep up the good work
10/27/2011 c1 sanbeegoldiewhitey
You won't be able to finish this. The revelation that Harry is the real BWL came too fast. Your story needs some angst.
You won't be able to finish this. The revelation that Harry is the real BWL came too fast. Your story needs some angst.
7/11/2011 c1 
2DaRoHa
Great story. It's short and simple and to the point. Solves the wrong BWL problem and lily isn't abusive to Harry. Great work.
2DaRoHaGreat story. It's short and simple and to the point. Solves the wrong BWL problem and lily isn't abusive to Harry. Great work.
6/13/2011 c1 2narutonarutolove
i like it, though i doubt lily would stay with a man that abused her child, physical or emotionally.
2narutonarutolovei like it, though i doubt lily would stay with a man that abused her child, physical or emotionally.
5/18/2011 c1 Cassandra30
Telling Dumbledore is absolutely the worst thing they could do! He is going to try to convince them that Harry will go Dark! Why can't people think for themselves?
Telling Dumbledore is absolutely the worst thing they could do! He is going to try to convince them that Harry will go Dark! Why can't people think for themselves?
5/3/2011 c1 6BaltaineShadow
I reall like the beginning. Now I wonder how it might continue?
Please update soon :)
6BaltaineShadowI reall like the beginning. Now I wonder how it might continue?
Please update soon :)