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8/6/2011 c1 14GirlMood
I always enjoy a good poem, and I think you did pretty well for your first attempt at free verse. While lyrically simple, I like that it is - I feel that this makes the 'story' of the poem clear. Also, correct me if I'm wrong, but I believe this line 'I had taken a spot in his saddle (for he was the leader in our charade)' is actually a very pretty innuendo. It made me giggle - though, I'm not sure if this was the type of reaction you intended to receive. In any case, good job! :]
4/18/2011 c1 48IronSpockMaster
Wow, this is awesome. :)

And really good use of the prompts as well.

Thanks for taking part :D
4/15/2011 c1 2Beizanten
great poem. love marlfoy won

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