for Scary Monsters8/5/2012 c3 
28theHuntgoeson
So, is Lucas Green the man to watch? This is a very intriguing story, and I hope you write more of it sometime. You've got the Gene/Alex relationship really well, and Frankie is a wonderful character.
28theHuntgoesonSo, is Lucas Green the man to watch? This is a very intriguing story, and I hope you write more of it sometime. You've got the Gene/Alex relationship really well, and Frankie is a wonderful character.
9/9/2011 c3 JoinTheHunt1981
Loving this story! You've written Frankie so well! I'm looking foward to more :)
Which book is it you're reading where the character is described as "like Gene Hunt but louder"?
Please update soon!
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Loving this story! You've written Frankie so well! I'm looking foward to more :)
Which book is it you're reading where the character is described as "like Gene Hunt but louder"?
Please update soon!
x
5/31/2011 c3 5sillygenie
Like how Alex and Frankie have different views on the same event. Like them together. Can't wait to read more. x
5sillygenieLike how Alex and Frankie have different views on the same event. Like them together. Can't wait to read more. x
5/30/2011 c3 71Jazzola
Chris on Doctor Who? Shaz with glasses and no Chris? Someone claiming to be louder than Gene Hunt? (You're going to have to tell me which book that is.)
This is great writing! Very much looking forward to more.
Jazzola :)
71JazzolaChris on Doctor Who? Shaz with glasses and no Chris? Someone claiming to be louder than Gene Hunt? (You're going to have to tell me which book that is.)
This is great writing! Very much looking forward to more.
Jazzola :)
5/30/2011 c3 42Eleantris
Don't worry about the long delay. This was a brilliant chapter, I loved it! Can't wait for more.
X =D
42EleantrisDon't worry about the long delay. This was a brilliant chapter, I loved it! Can't wait for more.
X =D
5/8/2011 c2 28theHuntgoeson
This is marvellous writing, you have a great ability to crate atmosphere and character, Frankie is very well drawn. And I like the hints of Galex, especially Gene's appreciation of Alex's defiance. Great stuff, please write more!
28theHuntgoesonThis is marvellous writing, you have a great ability to crate atmosphere and character, Frankie is very well drawn. And I like the hints of Galex, especially Gene's appreciation of Alex's defiance. Great stuff, please write more!
4/27/2011 c2 sash queen of the jungle
I think Alex is quite taken by frankie. And gene is just waiting for the make up after she disobeyed him. Please update soon.
I think Alex is quite taken by frankie. And gene is just waiting for the make up after she disobeyed him. Please update soon.
4/24/2011 c2 5sillygenie
Yay, Motorhead! Alright, like how you've drawn the connection between Alex losing her parents and Frankie having her mum murdered. Gene smiling - whatever next? - Actually, I'm really looking forward to reading whatever comes next - confident in your capable hands. Great stuff.x
5sillygenieYay, Motorhead! Alright, like how you've drawn the connection between Alex losing her parents and Frankie having her mum murdered. Gene smiling - whatever next? - Actually, I'm really looking forward to reading whatever comes next - confident in your capable hands. Great stuff.x
4/21/2011 c2 71Jazzola
This is great! Really great writing and a nice plot. I like it!
Thanks for publishing, and I look forward to more.
Jazzola :)
71JazzolaThis is great! Really great writing and a nice plot. I like it!
Thanks for publishing, and I look forward to more.
Jazzola :)
4/21/2011 c2 42Eleantris
Wow, this is a brilliant story! Frankie makes for a really interesting character, and I love the hints of Galex that have been there so far. Keep writing, and I can't wait for more!
X =D
42EleantrisWow, this is a brilliant story! Frankie makes for a really interesting character, and I love the hints of Galex that have been there so far. Keep writing, and I can't wait for more!
X =D
4/20/2011 c2 21Fenella Church
Loved how Gene was when Alex disobeyed him- poor Frankie though- if you're stuck for Bowie songs ,which I doubt, but anyway Lady Grinning Soul is a good one.
21Fenella ChurchLoved how Gene was when Alex disobeyed him- poor Frankie though- if you're stuck for Bowie songs ,which I doubt, but anyway Lady Grinning Soul is a good one.
4/18/2011 c1 5sillygenie
Just found this fic - and wow! It doesn't half pack a punch. Starting like a proper crime novel - Frankie is really good character. Love how raw and dark it all is and its feel of real nasty. It's obviously a horrible crime, but it doesn't come left of field to the show, which I like. Frankie's reactions and general snappiness are great. Looking forward to reading more.x
5sillygenieJust found this fic - and wow! It doesn't half pack a punch. Starting like a proper crime novel - Frankie is really good character. Love how raw and dark it all is and its feel of real nasty. It's obviously a horrible crime, but it doesn't come left of field to the show, which I like. Frankie's reactions and general snappiness are great. Looking forward to reading more.x
4/16/2011 c1 21Fenella Church
Brilliant writing and characterisation- and what is is about Frankie that makes me want to bawl my eyes out?
The line about her mam being dead was so powerful, looking forward to reading more.
21Fenella ChurchBrilliant writing and characterisation- and what is is about Frankie that makes me want to bawl my eyes out?
The line about her mam being dead was so powerful, looking forward to reading more.