for The Strike in the Alley5/10/2022 c5 JuliehtMdos
Oh no, you can't leave this like this, I just found this FF and I need more, hahaha I need to know how this will end.
Oh no, you can't leave this like this, I just found this FF and I need more, hahaha I need to know how this will end.
4/19/2021 c1 Guest
Loved this story. Please, please try to find time to finish this perfect story
Loved this story. Please, please try to find time to finish this perfect story
3/31/2021 c4 Anibal704
Oh, you can't leave it here! Hopefully we'll get an update soon for the very nice story!
Oh, you can't leave it here! Hopefully we'll get an update soon for the very nice story!
10/11/2020 c5 Shandy Mac
Woohoo! Loved this chapter, and I didn’t even beta it as I read...lol. Using Shandy Mac as I’m on a different iPad. My other one is giving up the ghost so I had to use a different name for ff. But you know who I am with this name, so I went with it. Your writing style is still SO you, which means it’s enthralling and captivating.
Cast yourself back to your AN at the start of ch. 2 - a teeth aren’t bones, so you’ve still got 206 luv...lol.
I’ve now followed and favourited this story under my new name and on this iPad, so I’ll get alerts now.
Love it. Love you. And love my Fry’s. xxx.
Woohoo! Loved this chapter, and I didn’t even beta it as I read...lol. Using Shandy Mac as I’m on a different iPad. My other one is giving up the ghost so I had to use a different name for ff. But you know who I am with this name, so I went with it. Your writing style is still SO you, which means it’s enthralling and captivating.
Cast yourself back to your AN at the start of ch. 2 - a teeth aren’t bones, so you’ve still got 206 luv...lol.
I’ve now followed and favourited this story under my new name and on this iPad, so I’ll get alerts now.
Love it. Love you. And love my Fry’s. xxx.
8/24/2020 c5 OscarSierraCQB
Character interactions /introspective -good, plot - good, UST great, writing style very good. All it needs now is to add more chapters and conclusion and this will be on my favourite list. Adopt the motto: He Who Dares Wins!
Character interactions /introspective -good, plot - good, UST great, writing style very good. All it needs now is to add more chapters and conclusion and this will be on my favourite list. Adopt the motto: He Who Dares Wins!
8/19/2020 c5 jsboneslover
Updates are always welcomed! Can't wait for them to get to the apartment! I like how you put the tournament out of town.
Updates are always welcomed! Can't wait for them to get to the apartment! I like how you put the tournament out of town.
8/20/2020 c5 Poppyblue5
How exciting to find another chapter. Funnily enough, I was rereading one of your older stories just a few days ago. I look forward to more of this one.
How exciting to find another chapter. Funnily enough, I was rereading one of your older stories just a few days ago. I look forward to more of this one.
8/19/2020 c5 
11doge
Oh, we waited years for that. Please don't let us wait any longer for an update. Now, with that cliffhanger….
11dogeOh, we waited years for that. Please don't let us wait any longer for an update. Now, with that cliffhanger….
8/19/2020 c5 111GalaxieGurl
Oh, my gosh! You're going to leave us dangling here, with Brennan telling Booth, that yes, she really wants to go home...with him...to continue what started that morning? Please, don't wait another year to update this story, or Booth won't be the only one trying to quell his frustration. I just zoomed through chapters 2-5, having never received any alerts for the intervening chapters since my first review in October of 2014. Love this story! Your use of amusingly different UK terms for common items is as entertaining as the wonderful interaction between our crime-fighting partners now heading toward that fateful date when his anger and her imperviousness melt away into acknowledging/fulfilling the romance that everyone around them already sees! Just a perfect tale, as usual, with your superb writing skills. Jen is nice to be your beta, but IMO you don't need one at all! Now please go write chapters 6 through 20. Pretty please!
111GalaxieGurlOh, my gosh! You're going to leave us dangling here, with Brennan telling Booth, that yes, she really wants to go home...with him...to continue what started that morning? Please, don't wait another year to update this story, or Booth won't be the only one trying to quell his frustration. I just zoomed through chapters 2-5, having never received any alerts for the intervening chapters since my first review in October of 2014. Love this story! Your use of amusingly different UK terms for common items is as entertaining as the wonderful interaction between our crime-fighting partners now heading toward that fateful date when his anger and her imperviousness melt away into acknowledging/fulfilling the romance that everyone around them already sees! Just a perfect tale, as usual, with your superb writing skills. Jen is nice to be your beta, but IMO you don't need one at all! Now please go write chapters 6 through 20. Pretty please!
1/18/2015 c4 Guest
This is great. Please keep going!
This is great. Please keep going!
1/17/2015 c1 Guest
Love this.
Love this.