
12/21/2011 c9 Drakron
I knew that was coming, though it is sad that a young person takes her own life.
I knew that was coming, though it is sad that a young person takes her own life.
6/2/2011 c5 Joseph
Sooooo sad theygot hit :(
Sooooo sad theygot hit :(
5/30/2011 c4 Chubsie-Joergie on mobile
This is weird but good Rosalie the first and rosaries twin sister? Hmm but it's a good chapter do they me wrong try to fix this problem because I loooove this story
This is weird but good Rosalie the first and rosaries twin sister? Hmm but it's a good chapter do they me wrong try to fix this problem because I loooove this story
5/30/2011 c4 Joseph
I dobt get it how Rosalie and Edward are related and Victoria and James are the bad Guys aren't they? But I liked the ending!
I dobt get it how Rosalie and Edward are related and Victoria and James are the bad Guys aren't they? But I liked the ending!
5/30/2011 c3 Joseph
good chapter but it doesn't make sense since in the first chapter Rosalie woke up in the hospital!
good chapter but it doesn't make sense since in the first chapter Rosalie woke up in the hospital!
5/30/2011 c3 Chubsie-Joergie on mobile
Yaaaaaaaaay loooved it!
Yaaaaaaaaay loooved it!
5/4/2011 c1 Twilightgirl1724
Heyy Steph!
This is really good. I feel bad for poor Elizabeth. Update soon. And i finished Forgiven and made a sequel.
Lauren :)
Heyy Steph!
This is really good. I feel bad for poor Elizabeth. Update soon. And i finished Forgiven and made a sequel.
Lauren :)
4/29/2011 c2
5Chubsie-Joergie
1 Word! :
AAAAAWEEESOME! Thank you for dedicating it to me and your really good with descriptions and I would review this 1,000 times but im only allowed to review 1 per chapter -_- good story keep it up :) made my day!

1 Word! :
AAAAAWEEESOME! Thank you for dedicating it to me and your really good with descriptions and I would review this 1,000 times but im only allowed to review 1 per chapter -_- good story keep it up :) made my day!
4/29/2011 c1 Secret Reviewer
Aaaaw poor Elizabeth! What happened to her exactly?
Aaaaw poor Elizabeth! What happened to her exactly?
4/29/2011 c1 Joseph
So like this is an ehhh story
But its not crappy either the chapters needs to be longer thats about it!
So like this is an ehhh story
But its not crappy either the chapters needs to be longer thats about it!
4/28/2011 c1 Chubsie-Joergie
I loved it! But you should explain how the car accident happened and like Elizabeths last day but thats just my opinion! Please update soon! :)
I loved it! But you should explain how the car accident happened and like Elizabeths last day but thats just my opinion! Please update soon! :)