for Vilandra of Krypton4/24/2011 c1 
15pinfeather
I'm very interested to see how this turns out. However, I think you should write longer chapters and give more detail. I look forward to reading the next chapter!
15pinfeatherI'm very interested to see how this turns out. However, I think you should write longer chapters and give more detail. I look forward to reading the next chapter!
4/19/2011 c1 14SearchingForThatBlueBox
Great idea, this is the first story I've read with this concept. It's interesting. I hope there is more and that you will update soon. :)
14SearchingForThatBlueBoxGreat idea, this is the first story I've read with this concept. It's interesting. I hope there is more and that you will update soon. :)