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2/14/2012 c4 boringEvelyn
Coolio. I'm a little curious about Bella and her 'superiority', lol. I like Edward more in this story than the original, if that means anything. :)
5/22/2011 c4 3pauseplay
a chapter full of socializing 8D awesome. and and i really loved the small introduction about M.I.L.F.'s before Edward meets Esme. _O_
5/6/2011 c4 1Jenna Red
Hi! Awesome chapter and story. I love that it has greatr grammar and spelling and the story is very interesting. I've always wondered what it would be like if Bella was a Cullen. Thank you so much for writing this and I hope you update soon.

Have a good week!

Janxi
4/22/2011 c4 Guest
I liked it. It's good u showed how close Edward is to his mom
4/22/2011 c4 11paralighter4ever
who is this damn dog? someone tell me!

and aww mother-son moment! Does Edward have an older bro, or was that an older bro of his late dad's?
4/20/2011 c3 paralighter4ever
hopefully edward and bella's relationship will pick up from here.

and maybe the dog was leah?
4/20/2011 c1 Guest
Hey I love it so far! Keep updating and stay away from the evil writers block!
4/20/2011 c3 Guest
i really like your story so far, it's amuzing

i can't wait for the next chapter
4/20/2011 c3 1Jenna Red
okay, i was fine until the last part...what woods? what dog?

wrll, you've got my attention. :) can't wait for the next chapter to find out whats next.

Keep up the terrific writing! Enjoy your day!

Janxi

P.S. sorry if I make spellind errors, English isn't my home language but I'm studying it in a Home Language level at school now, so I'm learning... :)
4/20/2011 c2 Jenna Red
I'm getting excited by the story now.

Again, I love the story and thanks for writing it.

Janxi
4/20/2011 c1 Jenna Red
This is such a COOL story. I've often wondered what would happen if their story was reversed so thank you for showing me.

I love the story.

Enjoy your day,

Janxi
4/20/2011 c3 3pauseplay
I've seen a couple of stories floating around where Bella is the vampire and Edward the human and they never really caught my attention, 'cause it was exactly like Twilight but from a boy's perspective but this - this is different. It's an entirely different story and I really like it. ^^ Bella has a different personality (sort of) which suits her well and I like the mood you create. Keep on writing! 8D
4/20/2011 c3 50Mackenzie L
Beautiful ^_^ Keep writing!
4/20/2011 c3 jackiemack916
Oooh, nice forward motion! I wonder who the doctor's wife is? Haha, can't wait for the next chapter.
4/19/2011 c2 jackiemack916
Looking good. Very few errors. Keep it up.
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