for The Princess and the E12/30/2024 c27 saintfudge
Doesn’t matter how many times I read this ..I still love it thanks again have fun
Doesn’t matter how many times I read this ..I still love it thanks again have fun
12/3/2024 c31 SianJohn
I've just enjoyed a reread of this wonderful story. Thank you so much for sharing it with us and for leaving it here for us to enjoy time and time again.
I've just enjoyed a reread of this wonderful story. Thank you so much for sharing it with us and for leaving it here for us to enjoy time and time again.
311/26/2024 c8 Guest
"eye's off my woman" "Eye's" is not plural; it's possessive, and the eyes don't own anything in this. Apostrophes *never* are used with plural nouns.
And for the record, this story would be more believable if Edward weren't a teenager. Intelligent or not, a seventeen-year-old boy wouldn't have this kind of clout. If you had made him even 20 or 21, he and Bella still could have a relationship, and his influence would not be quite so laughable.
"eye's off my woman" "Eye's" is not plural; it's possessive, and the eyes don't own anything in this. Apostrophes *never* are used with plural nouns.
And for the record, this story would be more believable if Edward weren't a teenager. Intelligent or not, a seventeen-year-old boy wouldn't have this kind of clout. If you had made him even 20 or 21, he and Bella still could have a relationship, and his influence would not be quite so laughable.
7/26/2023 c28 pudget12
I have read this so so many times and every time this section comes up I cringe. I just don’t see Bella being that petty and judgmental over something her mom took the time to do. No matter how crappy Renee is.
That being said this is my ultimate go to, feel good, must read every time I see a link story. LOVE IT.
(Yes, it took me years to say the above)
“She seemed genuinely interested and handed me over two small sweaters that she had knitted for them.
I thanked her, trying not to cringe as I looked them over, because there was no way I was putting those god-awful jumpers on my boys.”
I have read this so so many times and every time this section comes up I cringe. I just don’t see Bella being that petty and judgmental over something her mom took the time to do. No matter how crappy Renee is.
That being said this is my ultimate go to, feel good, must read every time I see a link story. LOVE IT.
(Yes, it took me years to say the above)
“She seemed genuinely interested and handed me over two small sweaters that she had knitted for them.
I thanked her, trying not to cringe as I looked them over, because there was no way I was putting those god-awful jumpers on my boys.”