7/12/2020 c31 Lyndseyxx
Really enjoyed this, I love what you did with the characters! I do wish they’d been a bit older, I think it would have made the story feel a bit more realistic, but it was greatyou’re really talented
Really enjoyed this, I love what you did with the characters! I do wish they’d been a bit older, I think it would have made the story feel a bit more realistic, but it was greatyou’re really talented
7/12/2020 c13 Guest
Perfect. Absolutely love the boys getting excited over water pistols
Perfect. Absolutely love the boys getting excited over water pistols
6/27/2020 c28 saintfudge
Still a great story ..need more mob stories like this ...thanks agin have fun
Still a great story ..need more mob stories like this ...thanks agin have fun
6/23/2020 c19 Gemm13
Charlie is definitely in over his head, and Jacob is the worst, sanctimonious and patronizing af
Charlie is definitely in over his head, and Jacob is the worst, sanctimonious and patronizing af
6/23/2020 c18 Gemm13
I love how you write Edward as foul mouthed and sweet, delightful!
Plus, Bella is logical without being totally OOC
I love how you write Edward as foul mouthed and sweet, delightful!
Plus, Bella is logical without being totally OOC
6/7/2020 c7 FeebasFrodo14
I'm not sure as I read this how many years ago it was written but here I am still rereading it
I'm not sure as I read this how many years ago it was written but here I am still rereading it
5/25/2020 c23 Barbell21
As much as I want to love this story, I can’t with Bella. She’s naive, obnoxious and sometimes just plain annoying. I really wanted to like her but blah. I wish she was more assertive and badass but she’s just a teen who’s naive enough to be stupid.
As much as I want to love this story, I can’t with Bella. She’s naive, obnoxious and sometimes just plain annoying. I really wanted to like her but blah. I wish she was more assertive and badass but she’s just a teen who’s naive enough to be stupid.
5/23/2020 c31 bonnemine82
Dommage que la traduction google soit si dure en lecture mais franchement je me suis éclatée à lire cette histoire.
Merci
Dommage que la traduction google soit si dure en lecture mais franchement je me suis éclatée à lire cette histoire.
Merci
4/14/2020 c21 nizzyna
I’m betting dollars to doughnuts she’s pregnant, I mean, it was inevitable. Maybe she forgot about the birth control with all the Charlie madness...
I’m betting dollars to doughnuts she’s pregnant, I mean, it was inevitable. Maybe she forgot about the birth control with all the Charlie madness...
4/13/2020 c15 nizzyna
Oh shit! what I just exclaimed because of that last sentence. Thank god this story is finished so I don’t have to wait for an update lol. XD
Oh shit! what I just exclaimed because of that last sentence. Thank god this story is finished so I don’t have to wait for an update lol. XD