for The F a l l e n5/11/2011 c4 
13rinofmidnight
Killed her family what! That's is the worst cliffhanger you could ever leave...darn it's to perfect I'm hooked! Keep writing I want to know why did Rouge betray everyone!
13rinofmidnightKilled her family what! That's is the worst cliffhanger you could ever leave...darn it's to perfect I'm hooked! Keep writing I want to know why did Rouge betray everyone!
5/7/2011 c4 1Revolution18
I loooove how this chapter ended! I can't wait to read more. I really want to learn what Isis meant by Rogue killing her family and being a murderer. i mean, when does Rogue go bad? and why?
I can't wait to figure it out.
1Revolution18I loooove how this chapter ended! I can't wait to read more. I really want to learn what Isis meant by Rogue killing her family and being a murderer. i mean, when does Rogue go bad? and why?
I can't wait to figure it out.
4/28/2011 c3 Revolution18
Really good! I love the suspense at the end. I really want to know who Isis really is and how she knows the X Men. I love how protective Spark is over Isis! I really wonder how Isis is gonna survive being stabbed by Mystique.
The only thing I really noticed were a few spelling mistakes and that was pretty much it. Anyway, I can't wait to read more, so keep going! (:
Really good! I love the suspense at the end. I really want to know who Isis really is and how she knows the X Men. I love how protective Spark is over Isis! I really wonder how Isis is gonna survive being stabbed by Mystique.
The only thing I really noticed were a few spelling mistakes and that was pretty much it. Anyway, I can't wait to read more, so keep going! (:
4/24/2011 c2 13rinofmidnight
Very good chapter but i'd advise against opening to chapters by describing the sceneary "if spelled right" also just a few grammer problems, hey we all make them, just be careful when your dealing with past tense words and sometimes when your writing your brain gets ahead of your hands and you skip a word. But great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next and where you planning on going with this. :)Keep writing!
13rinofmidnightVery good chapter but i'd advise against opening to chapters by describing the sceneary "if spelled right" also just a few grammer problems, hey we all make them, just be careful when your dealing with past tense words and sometimes when your writing your brain gets ahead of your hands and you skip a word. But great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next and where you planning on going with this. :)Keep writing!
4/24/2011 c1 rinofmidnight
Great cliffhanger girl! Although there are a few grammer errors her and there overall wonderfully written. :) keep writing B...Aris90 :) Can't say your real name since I know you from school! But seriously your story has wonderful potential
Great cliffhanger girl! Although there are a few grammer errors her and there overall wonderfully written. :) keep writing B...Aris90 :) Can't say your real name since I know you from school! But seriously your story has wonderful potential