for The Lost Prophecy3/1/2016 c16 Guest
And then they made Mahad under the starry sky, lol.
Ok, I am just being an idiot there. But still, am loving this story. I hope you would consider writing more about this in the future. I would love to hear more about Mila and Marcus's life together before his eventual disappearance/death. Great work!
And then they made Mahad under the starry sky, lol.
Ok, I am just being an idiot there. But still, am loving this story. I hope you would consider writing more about this in the future. I would love to hear more about Mila and Marcus's life together before his eventual disappearance/death. Great work!
6/8/2014 c16 ASingleMind
I read this story before, but I think I went through it too quickly. I don't remember it being this beautiful... ; )
I read this story before, but I think I went through it too quickly. I don't remember it being this beautiful... ; )
3/21/2014 c17 ASingleMind
I really enjoyed reading your headcannons for this part of Skyland's story. The only issue I had was water running under the bridge in one of the earlier chapters. I understand why you designed it that, but it feels odd, even for the Sphere to use resources like that. Any natural waterways would run off the block, and having he Sphere create and manage their own seems strange...but then again it looked like there were pools outside of Tibald's lab, so who knows.
I've also read your other fic, and I'm looking forward to more...and really hoping this account isn't dead. : )
Mind
I really enjoyed reading your headcannons for this part of Skyland's story. The only issue I had was water running under the bridge in one of the earlier chapters. I understand why you designed it that, but it feels odd, even for the Sphere to use resources like that. Any natural waterways would run off the block, and having he Sphere create and manage their own seems strange...but then again it looked like there were pools outside of Tibald's lab, so who knows.
I've also read your other fic, and I'm looking forward to more...and really hoping this account isn't dead. : )
Mind
3/22/2012 c17 
40Kunaigirl
Ending with the badguy, nice! Though I hoped it was going to be a longer chapter, so that the ending wouldn't have felt so close, but since we've arrived at that point I still want to say how much I love this story, and that I hope you'll write more! See you at your next story! \(.)/
40KunaigirlEnding with the badguy, nice! Though I hoped it was going to be a longer chapter, so that the ending wouldn't have felt so close, but since we've arrived at that point I still want to say how much I love this story, and that I hope you'll write more! See you at your next story! \(.)/
3/21/2012 c17 12Someonerandome
Aww...is it really finished? :( Oh well, good story though! Do you think you'll do any more? Maybe chronicle the rise and fall of the first rebellion or something? I would really like to read more of your stuff...hint hint. Good story again, by the way!
12SomeonerandomeAww...is it really finished? :( Oh well, good story though! Do you think you'll do any more? Maybe chronicle the rise and fall of the first rebellion or something? I would really like to read more of your stuff...hint hint. Good story again, by the way!
3/6/2012 c16 40Kunaigirl
Cool que Marcus soit revenu! Mais c'est triste que le fic est bientôt fini. T.T Normalement je veut toujours qu'on update vite, mais cette fois ci c'est trop triste parceque c'est bientôt le fin. LOVE THIS FIC DON'T stop! ^^"
40KunaigirlCool que Marcus soit revenu! Mais c'est triste que le fic est bientôt fini. T.T Normalement je veut toujours qu'on update vite, mais cette fois ci c'est trop triste parceque c'est bientôt le fin. LOVE THIS FIC DON'T stop! ^^"
3/3/2012 c16 12Someonerandome
Ok, I finally had a free minute to review your story! (This will serve for both chapters, sorry about the last one)
The back story with the vector was interesting and I think it was probably in character for him. He always struck me as the kind that, because he is one of the rare individuals who seeks knowledge for its own sake, is sometimes rather naive about the rest of the world, so him starting out working for the sphere makes sense to me.
The interaction between Marcus and Mila was also kinda cute, I liked it.
I'd really like to see more of Oslo actually, just to cement the animosity that Mila feels towards him later on in the series (just a thought :) )
Sorry I don't have time to write more, I really meant free MINUTE, so I have to go...update soon!
12SomeonerandomeOk, I finally had a free minute to review your story! (This will serve for both chapters, sorry about the last one)
The back story with the vector was interesting and I think it was probably in character for him. He always struck me as the kind that, because he is one of the rare individuals who seeks knowledge for its own sake, is sometimes rather naive about the rest of the world, so him starting out working for the sphere makes sense to me.
The interaction between Marcus and Mila was also kinda cute, I liked it.
I'd really like to see more of Oslo actually, just to cement the animosity that Mila feels towards him later on in the series (just a thought :) )
Sorry I don't have time to write more, I really meant free MINUTE, so I have to go...update soon!
1/15/2012 c15 40Kunaigirl
Awww. These are exactly the chapters which I dread! You get a whole lot of information (which I love!), but then it suddenly stops and you want to continue reading! Man I love this story and I hope you update soon!
40KunaigirlAwww. These are exactly the chapters which I dread! You get a whole lot of information (which I love!), but then it suddenly stops and you want to continue reading! Man I love this story and I hope you update soon!
12/1/2011 c14 Kunaigirl
Not much happened in this chapter, but I guess the pirates cannot trust her that easily. ^^" I really hope the next chapter will be on soon! XD Keep at it!
Not much happened in this chapter, but I guess the pirates cannot trust her that easily. ^^" I really hope the next chapter will be on soon! XD Keep at it!
12/1/2011 c13 Kunaigirl
Poor Mila, really thought he was going to leave her behind. ^^" Luckily this pirate isn't that err piratish? Oh no, just realised I'm getting to the last chapter! I really hope the next one(s) follow soon!
Poor Mila, really thought he was going to leave her behind. ^^" Luckily this pirate isn't that err piratish? Oh no, just realised I'm getting to the last chapter! I really hope the next one(s) follow soon!
12/1/2011 c12 Kunaigirl
Wha- He's going to leave her behind? Once more good job! I'm totally sucked into this story! Can't. Wait. To. Know. The. Rest. Going straight to the next chapter! XD
Wha- He's going to leave her behind? Once more good job! I'm totally sucked into this story! Can't. Wait. To. Know. The. Rest. Going straight to the next chapter! XD
11/30/2011 c11 Kunaigirl
"Haha See ya suckers!" Marcus must've been thinking. XD Good they got away AND showed the new generation of bad guys what they're made of. Finally some peace. :P
"Haha See ya suckers!" Marcus must've been thinking. XD Good they got away AND showed the new generation of bad guys what they're made of. Finally some peace. :P
11/30/2011 c10 Kunaigirl
You know for a second there I was really thinking the worst...luckily Marcus came through. Sigh. The in-the-dark scene was supercute!
You know for a second there I was really thinking the worst...luckily Marcus came through. Sigh. The in-the-dark scene was supercute!
11/30/2011 c9 Kunaigirl
I'm not one to encourage lying to others, but she really had no other choice right? Why am I feeling a tad bit sorry for Oslo? No! Mila and Marcus are the good ones, no feeling sympathy for the bad guys! That's a no-go. Damn, why is this fic so good that we even feel bad for the bad guys? I think I'm losing it. ^^"
I'm not one to encourage lying to others, but she really had no other choice right? Why am I feeling a tad bit sorry for Oslo? No! Mila and Marcus are the good ones, no feeling sympathy for the bad guys! That's a no-go. Damn, why is this fic so good that we even feel bad for the bad guys? I think I'm losing it. ^^"
11/30/2011 c8 Kunaigirl
Oh no. I don't want to know what's going to happen AND I'm dying to know what's going to happen? Do I make any sense? This fic just keeps getting better and better! Keep it up!
Oh no. I don't want to know what's going to happen AND I'm dying to know what's going to happen? Do I make any sense? This fic just keeps getting better and better! Keep it up!