
5/14/2011 c12 Rated L For Loser
This was awesome! I literally squealed when they kissed which caused my mother to look at me like I'm crazy.
This was awesome! I literally squealed when they kissed which caused my mother to look at me like I'm crazy.
5/14/2011 c12
24tomboy2012
OMG. I was kind of freaked out at first when he was holding onto her pants. This really reminds me of when I went to see this at the theater and was thinking that Seth was bipolar. This seriously got that, so good job. The song ties in really well. Weird how they both reacted to it. And Jack is just like, Oh well, lest just turn on the music because I don't care if one of them dies back there" and it was cute how Alex took the pic. Can't wait till the next chapter. I don't know if it is too much to ask, but could you please make the chapters longer? Please don't feel like I am being rude or pressuring you. It is just that I enjoy your story so much and it only takes me a couple of minutes to read a chapter. Again, really good job on this chapter! :)

OMG. I was kind of freaked out at first when he was holding onto her pants. This really reminds me of when I went to see this at the theater and was thinking that Seth was bipolar. This seriously got that, so good job. The song ties in really well. Weird how they both reacted to it. And Jack is just like, Oh well, lest just turn on the music because I don't care if one of them dies back there" and it was cute how Alex took the pic. Can't wait till the next chapter. I don't know if it is too much to ask, but could you please make the chapters longer? Please don't feel like I am being rude or pressuring you. It is just that I enjoy your story so much and it only takes me a couple of minutes to read a chapter. Again, really good job on this chapter! :)
5/11/2011 c11
1xoxoMyRealityIsFiction
Nothing really to say, and since I've made a pact to review every chapter of very story I read, I have to at leat say something. Lol. Great chapter even though it was a filler!

Nothing really to say, and since I've made a pact to review every chapter of very story I read, I have to at leat say something. Lol. Great chapter even though it was a filler!
5/11/2011 c11 xoxoMyRealityIsFiction
Nothing really to say, and since I've made a pact to review every chapter of very story I read, I have to at leat say something. Lol. Great chapter even though it was a filler!
Nothing really to say, and since I've made a pact to review every chapter of very story I read, I have to at leat say something. Lol. Great chapter even though it was a filler!
5/11/2011 c7
24tomboy2012
LOL. I remeber this part. He was like "She happens to be human" and Jack and Sar both turned to glare at Seth. Hey, I usually don't like rewrites but I am really enjoying this one. Maybe it is the way that you write? I am not sure. But I seriously do like it :)

LOL. I remeber this part. He was like "She happens to be human" and Jack and Sar both turned to glare at Seth. Hey, I usually don't like rewrites but I am really enjoying this one. Maybe it is the way that you write? I am not sure. But I seriously do like it :)
5/11/2011 c11
9MayAngelsLeadYouIn
this story is still really good(:
I hope you're not going to hate me for this, but I can't help it.
theres just not very much seth leslie interaction. its cute and all when they do have those little moments, its just that theres not really in your story. :/
but im still liking it. and I hope you dont hate me for my criticism... (:

this story is still really good(:
I hope you're not going to hate me for this, but I can't help it.
theres just not very much seth leslie interaction. its cute and all when they do have those little moments, its just that theres not really in your story. :/
but im still liking it. and I hope you dont hate me for my criticism... (:
5/8/2011 c9
9MayAngelsLeadYouIn
monday?
thats like, forever away!
this is real good. (:
still loving it.

monday?
thats like, forever away!
this is real good. (:
still loving it.
5/6/2011 c8
1NinjaGnome97
Im absolutely LOVING your story, I love Seth from Race To Witch Mountain so Im really glad you wrote this, please write more soon! NinjaGnome97 xx

Im absolutely LOVING your story, I love Seth from Race To Witch Mountain so Im really glad you wrote this, please write more soon! NinjaGnome97 xx
5/6/2011 c8
9MayAngelsLeadYouIn
You're doing a really good job (:.
I'm glad they're not completely all over each other and all :D.
But they're still sweet to each other.
Yay for good stories! :D

You're doing a really good job (:.
I'm glad they're not completely all over each other and all :D.
But they're still sweet to each other.
Yay for good stories! :D