for Mourning4/22/2011 c1 
3Hirilnin
EXCELLENT imagery! I really liked this poem and your style in writing it. You have a definite talent that should be developed further. Please continue writing.
3HirilninEXCELLENT imagery! I really liked this poem and your style in writing it. You have a definite talent that should be developed further. Please continue writing.
4/22/2011 c1 Kelly Song
Oooh i am a HUGE fan of LOTR and my FAV verse in your poem is: Sadness washes over me as waves would lap the shore
we will not have time to mourn his passing
I realize this
And am seized by grief once more
AMAZING!
Oooh i am a HUGE fan of LOTR and my FAV verse in your poem is: Sadness washes over me as waves would lap the shore
we will not have time to mourn his passing
I realize this
And am seized by grief once more
AMAZING!
4/22/2011 c1 GildorInglorion
This is really good! But so sad... I guess we all know what happens afterwards anyway, right?
This is really good! But so sad... I guess we all know what happens afterwards anyway, right?
4/22/2011 c1 Ne'ith5
Very good it captures the events, his emotion and longing and hope I can see the events as they unfold. Great job!
Very good it captures the events, his emotion and longing and hope I can see the events as they unfold. Great job!