for Pythagoras' Other Therom5/4/2011 c1 
32Imagine What Could Happen
Aww, I really like this. It's so cute and only slightly out-of-character. I really liked the phrase: 'Twisted around each other'; it reminded me of a picture of a sculpture (I think it was a that anyway) we got shown in Art last week. I think it was called The Willow Man because it was made of Willow. Because the way my teacher described how the artist used willow she used the phrase 'twisted around each bit'.
Oh and my school planner has that quote as well.
This was good. (:
32Imagine What Could HappenAww, I really like this. It's so cute and only slightly out-of-character. I really liked the phrase: 'Twisted around each other'; it reminded me of a picture of a sculpture (I think it was a that anyway) we got shown in Art last week. I think it was called The Willow Man because it was made of Willow. Because the way my teacher described how the artist used willow she used the phrase 'twisted around each bit'.
Oh and my school planner has that quote as well.
This was good. (:
4/22/2011 c1 2Stephanie O
LOVED the title :D, but the only thing I know about Pythagoras is the Pythagorean Theorem from geometry... "a squared + b squared = c squared." Great quote, though! :)
I really liked Harry's apartment alarm, and also REALLY liked the way Harry proposed - a very nice surprise! Great story! :)
2Stephanie OLOVED the title :D, but the only thing I know about Pythagoras is the Pythagorean Theorem from geometry... "a squared + b squared = c squared." Great quote, though! :)
I really liked Harry's apartment alarm, and also REALLY liked the way Harry proposed - a very nice surprise! Great story! :)
4/22/2011 c1 shine lots
Ginny's loneliness is believable and their happiness at being together after the week is written really touchingly.
I like how realisticly Harry writes his report. It seems totally believable that he's motivated to finish it into the early hours of the morning. I like to imagine that he reached his epiphany while writing it.
Engagement. One word. Emotional. I liked it. I would love to see how thw Weasleys react to it in a one shot.
Why this particular title? Pythagoras is spelt with an 'as' not 'us'.
Ginny's loneliness is believable and their happiness at being together after the week is written really touchingly.
I like how realisticly Harry writes his report. It seems totally believable that he's motivated to finish it into the early hours of the morning. I like to imagine that he reached his epiphany while writing it.
Engagement. One word. Emotional. I liked it. I would love to see how thw Weasleys react to it in a one shot.
Why this particular title? Pythagoras is spelt with an 'as' not 'us'.