for Fade to Grey6/20 c28 
4Rosmerta
Such an unusual and original take on the time-travel story. I really enjoyed this. I hope you return someday with an epilogue!
4RosmertaSuch an unusual and original take on the time-travel story. I really enjoyed this. I hope you return someday with an epilogue!
6/19 c28 Guest
It's so delicate and beautiful that it kept me captivated until the very end even the second time around.
Thank you so much 3
It's so delicate and beautiful that it kept me captivated until the very end even the second time around.
Thank you so much 3
1/14 c28 paulieandgilbert
Absolutely wonderful! Not once did this story loose its momentum, so well written. I thoroughly enjoyed this! Thank you for sharing this with us! :-)
Absolutely wonderful! Not once did this story loose its momentum, so well written. I thoroughly enjoyed this! Thank you for sharing this with us! :-)
7/18/2022 c28 11Dearlady2002
So glad they ended up back together-i was worried for a bit there of how this would end!
11Dearlady2002So glad they ended up back together-i was worried for a bit there of how this would end!
7/16/2022 c13 Dearlady2002
I haven't reviewed yet, but I love it so far. I've seen the Timetraveler's Wife years ago, so that makes the jumps easier for my brain to handle and process, otherwise I'd be very lost I think lol.
I'm curious what she heard crying in town when she was lost from a jump- given how he knew the area so well in curious if it was a younger version of himself crying about something or another.
I really am happy she's found her way back to him now though- hopefully the "my Severus" part didn't go unnoticed by him (I doubt it did); perhaps the knowledge that there someone completely on his side will help him to not make the same mistakes we know he has in her future, or perhaps she's the reason he was able to turn spy and continue on the hard and lonely path that he does, instead of turning fully to the dark side.
I haven't reviewed yet, but I love it so far. I've seen the Timetraveler's Wife years ago, so that makes the jumps easier for my brain to handle and process, otherwise I'd be very lost I think lol.
I'm curious what she heard crying in town when she was lost from a jump- given how he knew the area so well in curious if it was a younger version of himself crying about something or another.
I really am happy she's found her way back to him now though- hopefully the "my Severus" part didn't go unnoticed by him (I doubt it did); perhaps the knowledge that there someone completely on his side will help him to not make the same mistakes we know he has in her future, or perhaps she's the reason he was able to turn spy and continue on the hard and lonely path that he does, instead of turning fully to the dark side.
7/15/2022 c28 11BowieQueen
Recently I have started so many stories that can't hold my attention. But this one did so beautifully. Fuck me, this was amazing. The pacing, the plot, the characterisations, all of it perfect.
11BowieQueenRecently I have started so many stories that can't hold my attention. But this one did so beautifully. Fuck me, this was amazing. The pacing, the plot, the characterisations, all of it perfect.
5/21/2022 c28 mjato
This was an enjoyable and well written story. I really appreciate that it treated time travel in a way that didn't make the characters overly powerful and therefore dull. A good amount of twists was additionally pleasant. Thank you, Marianne Le Fay and your betas! Fanfiction can be such a comforting experience, and i will certainly return to this story again.
I just realised I have read all 4 of your stories published here. I'm gonna now go sniffle over the sad fact that you don't have any more here. Again, thank you for your time and efforts in making this story available to us. You are a gem.
This was an enjoyable and well written story. I really appreciate that it treated time travel in a way that didn't make the characters overly powerful and therefore dull. A good amount of twists was additionally pleasant. Thank you, Marianne Le Fay and your betas! Fanfiction can be such a comforting experience, and i will certainly return to this story again.
I just realised I have read all 4 of your stories published here. I'm gonna now go sniffle over the sad fact that you don't have any more here. Again, thank you for your time and efforts in making this story available to us. You are a gem.
5/21/2022 c28 mjato
This was an enjoyable and well written story. I really appreciate that it treated time travel in a way that didn't make the characters overly powerful and therefore dull. A good amount of twists was additionally pleasant. Thank you, Marianne Le Fay and your betas! Fanfiction can be such a comforting experience, and i will likely return to this story again.
This was an enjoyable and well written story. I really appreciate that it treated time travel in a way that didn't make the characters overly powerful and therefore dull. A good amount of twists was additionally pleasant. Thank you, Marianne Le Fay and your betas! Fanfiction can be such a comforting experience, and i will likely return to this story again.
5/12/2022 c28 Crane
I like this story, thank you for writing it!
I like this story, thank you for writing it!
4/21/2022 c8 Becca Bella
Ive read this till Emma returned to her time-line.. its really sad but beautiful. I did jump ahead to the last page tho. Glad their together. I need hugs now.
Ive read this till Emma returned to her time-line.. its really sad but beautiful. I did jump ahead to the last page tho. Glad their together. I need hugs now.
4/5/2022 c28 Guest
I really enjoyed this story. Thank you!
I really enjoyed this story. Thank you!