for Gnome Statues and Warriors3/23/2014 c1 Lionblazeishawt
I peed mah pants. U can clean it up
I peed mah pants. U can clean it up
9/15/2012 c1 Guest
Cats can't smile
Cats can't smile
3/18/2012 c1 Guest
This was hilarious, an overall great story.
This was hilarious, an overall great story.
10/5/2011 c1 
1AngelOfThought
This fanfic is really good for a first try. The writing style is different from Erin Hunter's but it's written very well. I just have one tiny problem with this. How would the cats (besides Purdy) know about gnomes? It's not really a problem but it's something you could try to explain. Great job anyway!
1AngelOfThoughtThis fanfic is really good for a first try. The writing style is different from Erin Hunter's but it's written very well. I just have one tiny problem with this. How would the cats (besides Purdy) know about gnomes? It's not really a problem but it's something you could try to explain. Great job anyway!
5/9/2011 c1 bluepatch
OOOOH SO LOVELY!
PLZ MAKE 1 ABT SQUIRRELFIGHT AND BRAMBLECLAW GETTING BACK TOGETHER!
OOOOH SO LOVELY!
PLZ MAKE 1 ABT SQUIRRELFIGHT AND BRAMBLECLAW GETTING BACK TOGETHER!
5/4/2011 c1 4Heart of a Panther
That was so cute! Nothing's better then reading a fluffy one-shot with humor that can only come from a gnome.
4Heart of a PantherThat was so cute! Nothing's better then reading a fluffy one-shot with humor that can only come from a gnome.
5/2/2011 c1 The evil gnome
BOOO!
BOOO!
5/2/2011 c1 1NubLuv53
I thought it was really good :) You spelled some things wrong, (not that I'm one to judge!) but other than that, it was cute. I love how Cinderheart and Lionblaze got back together in the end!
(P.S.- you still have to fill me in on the next book! ;))
1NubLuv53I thought it was really good :) You spelled some things wrong, (not that I'm one to judge!) but other than that, it was cute. I love how Cinderheart and Lionblaze got back together in the end!
(P.S.- you still have to fill me in on the next book! ;))
4/26/2011 c1 13Maerd7733SCAIP
Hiyas! It be Sara!
This is terrible! Terribly funny, anyway! I have died and came back again to laugh some more! I love how you portrayed the characters! You really made it seem like a believable scenario and I hope to see more from you!
I be all stalkerish now... *shifty eyes*
13Maerd7733SCAIPHiyas! It be Sara!
This is terrible! Terribly funny, anyway! I have died and came back again to laugh some more! I love how you portrayed the characters! You really made it seem like a believable scenario and I hope to see more from you!
I be all stalkerish now... *shifty eyes*
4/24/2011 c1 2Brackenpaw
You should rate this "F" for fluff & fun! :)
I really liked it! For a one-shot it was just great, and it ended perfectly.
2BrackenpawYou should rate this "F" for fluff & fun! :)
I really liked it! For a one-shot it was just great, and it ended perfectly.
4/24/2011 c1 6Kisshu4eva
i thought this had quite a good story line but there were a few spelling mistakes and i think that it could be improved if you used more descriptions of the characters feelings. very good story
6Kisshu4evai thought this had quite a good story line but there were a few spelling mistakes and i think that it could be improved if you used more descriptions of the characters feelings. very good story
4/23/2011 c1 bps1006
Hey its bren! Nice, it had a few spelling errors but nice!
Hey its bren! Nice, it had a few spelling errors but nice!
4/23/2011 c1 Spottedpaw
Aw it was so fluffy
Aw it was so fluffy
4/22/2011 c1 Queen Mcfly
Yes! I'm not the only one who would think that Lionblaze would be cute with Cinderheart! Great story! :)
Yes! I'm not the only one who would think that Lionblaze would be cute with Cinderheart! Great story! :)