for The Two Queens10/7/2016 c4 deemura
your fic needs more recognition. Pity, there are many fics that super trash and get lots more fav/follow than yours
your fic needs more recognition. Pity, there are many fics that super trash and get lots more fav/follow than yours
10/7/2016 c3 deemura
it's hard to find realistic HP Twilight crossover and I'm glad I stumbled across your fic. and I totally agree with you, as strong vampire and the pack is, witches and wizards are in the top pyramid.
you're great, I could be very thankful if you decided to continue this story
it's hard to find realistic HP Twilight crossover and I'm glad I stumbled across your fic. and I totally agree with you, as strong vampire and the pack is, witches and wizards are in the top pyramid.
you're great, I could be very thankful if you decided to continue this story
7/27/2013 c2 Misfit4587
No insult meant for any Bella lovers but I cant stand her so killing her of would be fine by me.
No insult meant for any Bella lovers but I cant stand her so killing her of would be fine by me.
3/6/2013 c6 
7gemini-rose16
i dont no y u havent updated in like two years but u should defo think about comin back and completing this story xxx
7gemini-rose16i dont no y u havent updated in like two years but u should defo think about comin back and completing this story xxx
11/28/2012 c6 Mia Malfoy-Zabini
man ! am dying to read more ! please update soon ! pls pls pls !
P.S: the story rockss ! :)
man ! am dying to read more ! please update soon ! pls pls pls !
P.S: the story rockss ! :)
7/30/2012 c6 deleteplsgarbage
Lies! That was Draco wasn't it? Hopefully I'm right... anyway! Keep updating!
Lies! That was Draco wasn't it? Hopefully I'm right... anyway! Keep updating!
9/9/2011 c6 3Ottawa Pagan
very interesting story - curious to see how Hermione reacts when Jacob tells her about the imprint. Love how you've varied the plot with Bella being a magic attraction :)
3Ottawa Paganvery interesting story - curious to see how Hermione reacts when Jacob tells her about the imprint. Love how you've varied the plot with Bella being a magic attraction :)
7/5/2011 c6 8mygirlhermione
Great job! The only complaint I have is that it gets awfully confusing at times. I have no idea what's going on with the vampire dude who talked to Edward, and I also don't understand who the three vampires now working with Voldemort are. I don't understand why the vampire thought Harry killed his pack or whatever. So if you could clear that up and also tell us what Hermione is actually supposed to be doing. Because I like that she's a spy but I don't see how it would be helpful to the Order if they're not in contact. Anyways, great job! Keep writing (sorry if I overwhelmed you with questions)
8mygirlhermioneGreat job! The only complaint I have is that it gets awfully confusing at times. I have no idea what's going on with the vampire dude who talked to Edward, and I also don't understand who the three vampires now working with Voldemort are. I don't understand why the vampire thought Harry killed his pack or whatever. So if you could clear that up and also tell us what Hermione is actually supposed to be doing. Because I like that she's a spy but I don't see how it would be helpful to the Order if they're not in contact. Anyways, great job! Keep writing (sorry if I overwhelmed you with questions)
7/5/2011 c6 mygirlhermione
Great job! The only complaint I have is that it gets awfully confusing at times. I have no idea what's going on with the vampire dude who talked to Edward, and I also don't understand who the three vampires now working with Voldemort are. I don't understand why the vampire thought Harry killed his pack or whatever. So if you could clear that up and also tell us what Hermione is avtually supposed to be doing. Because I like that she's a spy but I don't see how it would be helpful to the Order if they're not in contact. Anyways, great job! Keep writing (sorry if I overwhelmed you with questions)
Great job! The only complaint I have is that it gets awfully confusing at times. I have no idea what's going on with the vampire dude who talked to Edward, and I also don't understand who the three vampires now working with Voldemort are. I don't understand why the vampire thought Harry killed his pack or whatever. So if you could clear that up and also tell us what Hermione is avtually supposed to be doing. Because I like that she's a spy but I don't see how it would be helpful to the Order if they're not in contact. Anyways, great job! Keep writing (sorry if I overwhelmed you with questions)
6/28/2011 c6 witch20
Wrong time to cut somebody's off. I can't wait to see what is going to happen. Keep it going.
Wrong time to cut somebody's off. I can't wait to see what is going to happen. Keep it going.
6/26/2011 c6 16TiannaMVA
lol. Thats fucked up. You would think Edward would go with his gut, but apparently not. *facepalm*
16TiannaMVAlol. Thats fucked up. You would think Edward would go with his gut, but apparently not. *facepalm*
6/12/2011 c6 3Hollytallon
You should have seen me reading chapter 5. I was leaning coser to the computer and super excited for what came next:) Keep it coming! I can't wait to read more!
Oh, and good luck with college! I don't start school for... like another 2 months... but I'll be a freshman, too (in HS, but still)!
lol anyway I love it!
3HollytallonYou should have seen me reading chapter 5. I was leaning coser to the computer and super excited for what came next:) Keep it coming! I can't wait to read more!
Oh, and good luck with college! I don't start school for... like another 2 months... but I'll be a freshman, too (in HS, but still)!
lol anyway I love it!