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1/6 c9 Guest
Oof yes what a hot perfect ending! Ha that woman deserved a consequence for doing that inadvertently to Gibbs. Loved this
11/2/2019 c9 8GosieKin
In overall, in three words - .It
11/2/2019 c8 GosieKin
"And don't take any more of those little blue pills. You've got so much alpha male testosterone in your system that they're toxic for you."

That had me laughing so hard! What a fantastic and funny pun from Ducky!
11/27/2015 c9 ladyaloysius
I'm sorry for your loss. You did a wonderful thing taking care of your mom for so long. Your humor and enthusiasm is very evident in the story! Totally cracked me up! Thanks!
9/16/2015 c9 12creativesm75
cool.
3/15/2015 c9 Singing Silverwings
What a great story! If the show had a different rating, I'd say I could see this being an episode on TV. Humorous, in character, brilliant. Thanks for writing and sharing it with us!
6/29/2014 c9 17MrsLJG5
I really enjoyed your story and thought it was really creative about the 'blue pill.'

In one of your chapters, you challenged a scenario with the blue pill. I'm thinking about it!

Thanks for the inspiration!
4/21/2014 c9 17VG LittleBear
Well told and very funny! But I think I'll handle it better in the context of Tony having a nightmare! Anything to avoid thinking this was for real ... yes, I do realize this is fiction, LOL.
Thanks and cheers!
3/26/2014 c9 3Theresa F
Since you read and reviewed my story I guess I should leave a review for you on this great little gem of a humorous story you wrote here... I loved it!
Would make a great plot for an episode if they ever would let Gibbs and Abby get together 8-)
I hope you plan on doing some mote writing, I know for me it is a great escape gets my mind away from the ups and downs of life and gives me purpose.
Have a great day 8-D

Theresa F
2/13/2013 c9 4Baby Fawn
well those little blue pills are known to pack a punch for what i heard cracks up... real good
7/22/2012 c1 Guest
I'm thinking that you don't like Tony because how angry Gibbs was to him.
7/22/2012 c8 Guest
Why was Gibbs so mean to Tony? It's not fair. They were both consenting adults to what they did. Gibbs shouldn't have hit Tony hard on the head for what two consenting adults do when they are together. And he shouldn't have made him go to the lecture. It's not Tony's fault that, that woman went crazy for what they did.
4/6/2012 c2 48dciphoenix
Ah... So you'd like to challenge myself and other fanfiction-ers

to come up with versions of that blue pill could wreck

havoc for a certain silver-haired ex Gunnery Sergeant? Hmm? ;)

...i wouldn't mind taking up that challenge! *throws gauntlet down*

I must've skipped by on reading that when I read this the 1st time, all those months ago... ;)

...btw congrats for continuing your writing after all the grief you've had! :)xxx
3/5/2012 c1 106JMK758
"rule 12… rule 12… rule 12… rule … rule… to hell with it! Rule 51" Wonderful! However, Abby moved so fast I would have liked her to draw it out. I couldn't see her making a move without teasing/tormenting him first.

The cup, definitely an "OH NO!" moment. But giving Tony the blue pill is sort of like giving a fish water.
1/25/2012 c4 Lostinthejumble
I just had to reread a couple of parts. And tell you how awesome you did the dialogue between Ducky and Abby as Abby is trying desperately to dodge the Duck! And Tony making his desk into a crime scene was priceless.

Is there going to be a sequel coming? Unexpected results? *wiggles eyebrows*
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