for Marine Guide to Pirates, Pillows and all that Jazz7/30/2014 c2 CelestialxXxAngel
Nice story you got here.
Mind if I send an OC? I'll send the OC with PM.
Nice story you got here.
Mind if I send an OC? I'll send the OC with PM.
4/1/2012 c2 
4Artemst
Yes, running two of these stories at the same time is not the best idea, but what the heck, since when were you for good ideas? XD
Ah, poor Noh, and any other character you come up with to be the main, they always seem abused and under-paid. Wait, they're not even paid are they?
Koobii and Noh will make an interesting team, and btw, did you scrap Mouth-freshener and clown-face or do you want me to send them over again? :3
4ArtemstYes, running two of these stories at the same time is not the best idea, but what the heck, since when were you for good ideas? XD
Ah, poor Noh, and any other character you come up with to be the main, they always seem abused and under-paid. Wait, they're not even paid are they?
Koobii and Noh will make an interesting team, and btw, did you scrap Mouth-freshener and clown-face or do you want me to send them over again? :3
4/1/2012 c2 5WandererfromtheWest
*reads chapter* Hum, it might just be me, but I think the original first part sounded better. Nothing wrong with it, just suprised with a few of the words changed around.
*reads the chapter further* ... *Falls out of my chair holding my sides as I laugh my A** off* OH! o-o-o-oohohhohohohoo! Tha-that w-was brilliant dude. N-nonno way in hell did I ever think that was the plan.
*pauses laughing fit, taking a thoughtful expression* Then again it was Tsuka, Noh's old man's and Koobii's ideas... *falls back into histerics*
The story continues! And I'm forward to more, who isn't? oo
Until next time, 'Cheerio!' :D
(PS. "Here is your shotgun." XD)
5WandererfromtheWest*reads chapter* Hum, it might just be me, but I think the original first part sounded better. Nothing wrong with it, just suprised with a few of the words changed around.
*reads the chapter further* ... *Falls out of my chair holding my sides as I laugh my A** off* OH! o-o-o-oohohhohohohoo! Tha-that w-was brilliant dude. N-nonno way in hell did I ever think that was the plan.
*pauses laughing fit, taking a thoughtful expression* Then again it was Tsuka, Noh's old man's and Koobii's ideas... *falls back into histerics*
The story continues! And I'm forward to more, who isn't? oo
Until next time, 'Cheerio!' :D
(PS. "Here is your shotgun." XD)
7/7/2011 c1 4Artemst
It sounds good so far, I know this will be epic like Alcohol is XD
Do you want more characters? I've a few of them lying around if you want.
I'm totally ruining my hiatus, but your stuff is worth it XD
4ArtemstIt sounds good so far, I know this will be epic like Alcohol is XD
Do you want more characters? I've a few of them lying around if you want.
I'm totally ruining my hiatus, but your stuff is worth it XD
4/25/2011 c1 51Oxenstierna D. Yuki-Rin
This sounds like an intresting experiment Noh is taking part in! My OCs will support him all the way, since they have an "ex"-Marine on their crew, too. (Actually, if you watch episode 133 of the One Piece anime, I adopted the Tajio kid in the marines who wanted to make curry onto my crew. That's the Marine I was talking about.)
51Oxenstierna D. Yuki-RinThis sounds like an intresting experiment Noh is taking part in! My OCs will support him all the way, since they have an "ex"-Marine on their crew, too. (Actually, if you watch episode 133 of the One Piece anime, I adopted the Tajio kid in the marines who wanted to make curry onto my crew. That's the Marine I was talking about.)
4/25/2011 c1 3fiendies
You know what I like about you, Red? The fact that you take awesome, kick everyone else's definition of it to the curb and reinvent as decidedly more fantastic than it was before.
Like, seriously, man, this is really cool. One Piece is kind of like a secret love for me and original stories are a not-so-secret love for me and when you put them together I JUST CAN'T HELP BUT LOVE IT. But this really is good, from a technical standpoint as well: great spelling and grammar, as well as over all text flow.
Also, you make me laugh.
I'm not kidding, there's just something about your writing that makes me smile like a complete idiot. And Noh is kind of cool. He's just so terrifically normal, I feel like I might even be able to relate to him (especially since he has a demented father...jokes).
But I honestly can't wait to see where you go with this, Red, you genius, you, so I'm gonna go ahead and alert this and then maybe send you a character?
Cheers~
3fiendiesYou know what I like about you, Red? The fact that you take awesome, kick everyone else's definition of it to the curb and reinvent as decidedly more fantastic than it was before.
Like, seriously, man, this is really cool. One Piece is kind of like a secret love for me and original stories are a not-so-secret love for me and when you put them together I JUST CAN'T HELP BUT LOVE IT. But this really is good, from a technical standpoint as well: great spelling and grammar, as well as over all text flow.
Also, you make me laugh.
I'm not kidding, there's just something about your writing that makes me smile like a complete idiot. And Noh is kind of cool. He's just so terrifically normal, I feel like I might even be able to relate to him (especially since he has a demented father...jokes).
But I honestly can't wait to see where you go with this, Red, you genius, you, so I'm gonna go ahead and alert this and then maybe send you a character?
Cheers~
4/25/2011 c1 5WandererfromtheWest
So, the tale begins. Noh is quite the interesting character to say the least, and his reaction to Tsuka's plan had me rolling on the floor! XD I look forward to more, as Koobii is sure to drive Noh crazy. Or at the very least, cause some very humorous moments. Until next time, 'Cheerio'! :D
5WandererfromtheWestSo, the tale begins. Noh is quite the interesting character to say the least, and his reaction to Tsuka's plan had me rolling on the floor! XD I look forward to more, as Koobii is sure to drive Noh crazy. Or at the very least, cause some very humorous moments. Until next time, 'Cheerio'! :D