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4/29/2011 c2 1Slifer1988
not a bad story so far perhaps hinata is a bit too insane

pairings: Samui and Fu

nibi and kyubi should be added simply because they are inside their hosts
4/29/2011 c2 2Foxes-rocks
Fū and Fem-Nibi are my choices
4/29/2011 c2 26xNamikazeKyuubix
...DAMN! Hinata didn't die... trying to kill Naruto and Yugito's daughter! Blasphemy! For that outrage I shall purposely create thousands upon thousands of overpowered OC's to beat up Hinata before killing her in the most painful way imaginable only to revive her and do it all over again! Kukukuku!

Yay for Yugi-chan and Mei-chan being in the harem! As for the two remaining girls... FEM.KYUUBI MUST MUST MUST BE ONE OF THEM!~~~~~~~~ The second I say either Nibi, Yugao or Guren! Awesome harem for the wins!~!~! Kill bitchy-stalker-dumbass-Hyuuga Hinata please!

Looking forward to the next chapter! Keep it up man, Ja ne!

4/29/2011 c2 7luffyxrobin-luffyxnami
Kyuubi and mini should already be a given since kyuubi doesn't belong with anyone else but naruto, and nibi is inside yugito and I bet mini wld feel jealous and heart broken that she can't have love to, and she wld have a crush on naruto after all this time font u think? So I think those two shod come free, if not they are who I'm voting for, if they do come free I wld like to vote for anko and kurenai... Pm me the results btw.
4/29/2011 c2 Tobi Fan 321
Great chapter! Hope you update soon!
4/29/2011 c2 Devilsummoner666
well man tht was a good story if a bit short. keep it up and update when possible and see if you can make the chapters longer somehow
4/29/2011 c1 Tobi Fan 321
Great chapter!
4/29/2011 c2 1turki-sama

nice of you to update :D

it was a pretty good chapter but it had some spelling and grammer errors, but all else is good!

as for the extra women i would suggest 3:

*anko-'cuz she shares naruto's pain of loneliness

*fuu-she's a jinchuriki, end of story

*kurenai-she's REALLY hot, end of discussion

'till next time

Ja ne!
4/28/2011 c2 1Trotha
First off this story is down right incredible! I have to say that your description of the CS(Creepy Stalker) was spot on. I mean really if following someone around and constantly spying on them from the shadows with x-ray eyes is love then that means that my ex-girlfriend is the one for me. In short that type of attitude is common with those who have either shrines of someone or are completly dependent on thier victim.

I agree with you having Naruto ditch the perv because in Shippuden when he comes back after THREE YEARS he is practically the same fighter while everyone else has surpassed him.

I'm curious though over whether or not Rei is Naruto's only child at the moment.

As for the additional girls I'm voting for Anko(simmilar past) and Guren(seriously badass with her crystal powers!).
4/28/2011 c2 53Dragoon Of Darkness
All plese? ^_^ if i can't have all then Kurenai and Sumai but all does sound better. Keep up the great work and don't stop ^_^.

votes for all! Also a cookie to.
4/28/2011 c2 crazymexican
Good story

For the last pair can be nibi and kyuubi for naruto
4/28/2011 c2 kirakhir
I'm voting for Fem Kyuubi and Anko or Samui
4/28/2011 c2 DarkWorld101
fem kyuubi and konan
4/28/2011 c2 jamandrod
I would advise that you tone the bashing down, if you go to over the top with it it could damage the storie as a whole.

Also for the harem i want fū, kyuubi, and nibi
4/28/2011 c2 Fumetsu-Kyo
that was helarious with jiraiya bowing to naruto

the girls i first choice is Anko but the second one is either Kurenai (to piss off hinata) and Samui (Yugito probally knows her or friends with her) also she can piss off hinata.

keep up the good work.
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