Reviews: The Flames of the Yellow Phosphorus

3/31/2018 c1

14TomboyJessie13
Wow, I did not see that ending coming, good work on the story.

4/24/2016 c1 OICHIRU
YEAH TO HELL WITH DEM TOWNSFOLK

11/28/2011 c1

7Dale Z. Larmint
hi :D

on one note, try not to bold everything ^-^; it hurts my eyes a bit @-@

i love the little match girl story! even though it's sad...

anyways good job :D keep writing

9/20/2011 c1 No Contact Ever
that was awesome thanks so much for that story ^_^

8/31/2011 c1

4Snowfur10
...one word. Wow. o_o

That was really cool! Although it might have been a little rushed (but that might just be because I read too fast for my own good), I was pretty much...at a loss for words...

Evil version of Little Match Girl. Love it.

7/31/2011 c1

13macchime
(O_x)

Creepily like the song...which I love, so I LOVE BOTH! It was an amazing story, and a pleasure to read.

Come to think of it...I'd probably end up doing the same thing for bread...

Thanks for writing!

7/30/2011 c1

31I Am The Raptor
Wow. That kinda reminds me of a ghost story...anyway, loved the story!

4/26/2011 c1 Kihihi
Damn, that was really good! It was a really chilling twist. Good job!

Eh my only problem's with the formatting - it's best not to use bold for your story, and separate the Author's Note from the story, that's all.