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10/4/2015 c1 kankusan
LOL, love the bet! :) This is such a fun piece! You've accomplished so much in just a few words; I'm really impressed with how descriptive this is, and how smoothly you handled their simple little communication there in the woods. Seriously, well done!
9/2/2013 c1 MzRenai
I had during one of their sparring lessons, too!
3/21/2012 c1 aradiaeva
Really great fic. Loved Jen being afraid to be lost in the woods and Ronon sent to fetch her. Loved the guys running bets on how they would finally get together.
4/29/2011 c1 Veera Grier
Great story! They are so cute together! And I really love the bet part!
4/29/2011 c1 131LMXB
Such a feel good story - I can't believe how much you managed to get into just 1000 words.
4/27/2011 c1 Sleep Faerie
Cute. Sweet. Completely possible, I can hear Sheppard, Ronan and Jennifers voices in my head as I was reading. This lovely story made my evening.

Sleep Faerie
4/27/2011 c1 37renisanz
Ha! Adorable, Jen. John and Evan's shocked reaction to Ronon and Jen holding hands was priceless. Loved the reference to Lorne and Sheppard's penchant for gambling. :)
4/26/2011 c1 15daisyscrapper
Oh my gosh, I think this is my ultimate favorite story by you now :) How cute! I absolutely loved the hand holding, but what beats it all was the betting comments at the end! My only complaint is that it's a one shot!
4/26/2011 c1 Flowerfairy30
That made me giggle. Very Cute. Of all the thing to bet on about Jennifer, their relationship would have some interesting possible places. I really liked the story.
4/26/2011 c1 1ainokea2810
Short and sweet. A very lovely story.
4/26/2011 c1 22hifield
This was sooooo good! Loved it throughly especially all the betting pool references! Good job!
4/26/2011 c1 18BrnEyesTX
ya.. you did it! and if you tell any one i read your ronon fic and liked it.lol YA! for thunder storms that cause hand holding =)
4/26/2011 c1 58ladygris
LOL! Great challenge response!

I honestly saw Ronon coming to get the Doc, but the little ending with Sheppard and Lorne was a delightful surprise! I love that both of them had laid odds on when Jennifer and Ronon would finally get together, but that neither of them won. (It would be interesting to find out exactly who did win! *winks*)

Loved the entire story!
4/26/2011 c1 5Lithane
Great work. An excellent submission to the challenge...;-)
4/26/2011 c1 61ShaViva
*grins* love this! Jennifer walking though a literal dark and stormy night and having Ronon startle her was fun, and of course them holding hands with some romantic purpose was cool. Loved Shep's reaction and Lorne's too ... and the ending line really fit. Nice job!

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