for Bully and Lover?8/30/2020 c14 Guest
Okay.
50000 dollars is like WAY too much like it is nearly the cost of my apartment. Like yeah. A bit of over exaggeration. In my case , my family would have disowned me and would have thrown me out of my house.
Thank you.
Okay.
50000 dollars is like WAY too much like it is nearly the cost of my apartment. Like yeah. A bit of over exaggeration. In my case , my family would have disowned me and would have thrown me out of my house.
Thank you.
3/14/2020 c2 Guest
All of the boys in the class looked at me with their jaws dropped... There were 2 very pretty girls in the room giving me glares. One boy... boy looked at me with dreamy eyes.
All this in kindergarten.. huh.
How mature are kindergarten kids in your country?
Also, it's 'bullying'.
All of the boys in the class looked at me with their jaws dropped... There were 2 very pretty girls in the room giving me glares. One boy... boy looked at me with dreamy eyes.
All this in kindergarten.. huh.
How mature are kindergarten kids in your country?
Also, it's 'bullying'.
6/14/2016 c1 Yammcie
i just read the first chapter and i believe it is a wonderful start. However, there was one thing that i feel you must try to word more carefully next time. Saying that you're the RIGHT size and height of a teenaged girl can be taken in offense. You're low key saying that if someone is bigger or smaller than that weight or height then they are the wrong size and height. I don't know if you know this,but there are plenty of teenaged girls reading stories like these who already believe they aren't the right height or weight and already hear it from people at school , just like in the story. I suggest when you write things like this you word it differently next time to not make it sound like there's anything. I still think this story is great and i can't wait to read the rest.
i just read the first chapter and i believe it is a wonderful start. However, there was one thing that i feel you must try to word more carefully next time. Saying that you're the RIGHT size and height of a teenaged girl can be taken in offense. You're low key saying that if someone is bigger or smaller than that weight or height then they are the wrong size and height. I don't know if you know this,but there are plenty of teenaged girls reading stories like these who already believe they aren't the right height or weight and already hear it from people at school , just like in the story. I suggest when you write things like this you word it differently next time to not make it sound like there's anything. I still think this story is great and i can't wait to read the rest.
10/5/2014 c2 Autumn Young
Once again, please make your chapters longer. Many readers will enjoy reading a long chapter even if it takes longer to update, then an insanely short chapter every week. The quality of your writing is good, though.
Best Wishes,
Autumn
Once again, please make your chapters longer. Many readers will enjoy reading a long chapter even if it takes longer to update, then an insanely short chapter every week. The quality of your writing is good, though.
Best Wishes,
Autumn
10/5/2014 c1 Autumn Young
Love the story plot! Although I would've liked it if you made the prologue a bit longer ( perhaps by adding some flashbacks so we knew the full extent of the bullying ) also correct some grammar errors. Keep up the fantastic work!
Autumn 3
Love the story plot! Although I would've liked it if you made the prologue a bit longer ( perhaps by adding some flashbacks so we knew the full extent of the bullying ) also correct some grammar errors. Keep up the fantastic work!
Autumn 3
1/29/2014 c11 genesis
omg milkweed did you by any chane go to Cartersville middle
omg milkweed did you by any chane go to Cartersville middle
7/6/2013 c1 Anonymous
Just FYI- when chapters are that short it makes people not even want to get started with the story... Like me...
Just FYI- when chapters are that short it makes people not even want to get started with the story... Like me...
211/3/2012 c20 Guest
PLEEEEAASSEE UPDATE SOON! IM HOOKED TO THIS STORY!
PLEEEEAASSEE UPDATE SOON! IM HOOKED TO THIS STORY!