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4/29/2011 c1 13Utatane
This is actually an awesome piece of prose. He doesn't sound whiny at all; in fact, if anything, he sounds cold, which fits perfectly. You can really understand all the different emotions he was feeling; not just the rage, as portrayed in the manga and most other fanfics, but betrayal as well; he actually did trust his 'father', and it all went to waste.

You can see how Xanxus may have turned into what he is from what he was, even though there wasn't much of a gap to begin with, and I actually felt the way he did, rather than the usual pity.

Sorry, rambling, lol, but yeah. It's really good C;

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