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9/21/2012 c1 6obako-chan97
THA'S SOOO CUUTTTEEEEEEE KORRAAA!
3/12/2012 c1 q1q2q3
Great. Lal and Colonello are such a pair..

I smiled when Colonello started blushing.

This is the only mistake I have found.

Whoever is up there, thank you for giving me a chance to be alone to be alone with the woman I like. This is a sign that I should further improve our relationship, right? The blond peeked over at his Commander.

This should be..

Whoever is up there, thank you for giving me a chance to be alone with the woman I like. This is a sign that I should further improve our relationship, right? The blond peeked over at his Commander.

You accidentally put to be alone twice. Other than that, thank you for the dosage of ColonelloLal fluff. -smiles-
4/30/2011 c1 10Arya May
AWW! that was really cute. it would be awesome if you would update this soon.
4/30/2011 c1 11Higanbana.4
cute.
4/26/2011 c1 153Nightsmoke
Aw, they are so cute! I can imagine Colonello head over heels in love...

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