1/31/2021 c6 Guest
Gross, very gross in every way possible. The number of problems this has is unbelievable as this fic deserves to be burned to save everyone’s eyes.

1. Introduced a Gary Stu character we know nothing about and doesn’t give us a backstory and expect everyone to just accept his Adonis existence like the sun in reality you shouldn’t at all

2. All females are nothing more than wanton whores to suck your powertrip fantasy character humongous sword and take anything good about them. Claims to respect women but in reality you don’t at all if you make respectable women act like OOC whores for no reason at all.

3. Too many crossovers that it’s mess and don’t blend at all. Like shoving every piece of food in existence inside a blender and expect it to taste good which it doesn’t at all.

4. Dialogue is bland and ripping off from other franchises. Worse it doesn’t match the situation at all.

5. Very predictable to the point you don’t need to see the future to know where it’s going. It doesn’t take you at the edge of your seat at all

6/6/2019 c6 TrisPHT
Hello again SM999, I'm the one formally named Unknown & would like a big request if you ever follow. Since you definitely dislike on Deviantart the double trouble Cade Black & Cyborg Fused Zamasu's info which I also hate, please update your heroic self & perhaps Shota self with a massive power boost to surpass those guys. (Thankfully since Zamasu only focuses on your body he doesn't fully access your equipment/weapons). Also think a partner to give each of the dynamic duo to fight alongside with is recommended.

Such as sentient objects like a Blue Beetle Scarab reformatted into a style of your choosing, Symbiote, Slimebiote or perhaps fuse them with someone. Such as an alternate Ben 10000 to become complete with a Biomnitrix, a Supreme Kai for a permanent Potara fusion or anyone unique not on your list. Infinite possibilities that is viewed & happening for your good OC to become the strongest in any universe is truly fascinating! I'm really looking for anything else you put on, so farewell for now.

4/25/2018 c6 Unknown
Hey Spider-Man999! Like to first say I'm a huge fan of your most OP OC in the entire multiverse! Congratulations on coming up with him! Anyways been wondering, ever had thoughts on extending/improving your harem lists? Would really like to see more, & may you keep up the good work.

Examples I've been thinking includes:
Some of the daughters of the Charlotte Family such as Charlotte Smoothie from One Piece
Cosmos, Dimaria Yesta & Brandish μ from Fairy Tail
To girls from Akame Ga Kill, Infinite Stratos, Pretty Cure, Trinity Seven & Yuragi-sou no Yuuna-san

3/2/2017 c6 Dark Alien
More Bleach 10 please
Ben x harribel!

2/28/2016 c1 PirateKingF
Im sure its a goo story but it seems a little to boring for me but keep it up as long as you like what you are doing go for it

3/22/2014 c6 Winky Keaton
I here anew aliens on ben 10 his name is Gutrot . Gutrot has the appearance of a mechanical humanoid in a green outfit, with the exception of his head and shoulders being the color blue/purple. He has four fingers on each white hand, which are apparently gloved. Like Water Hazard, he has nozzles/openings from where he can eject gas. They are located on his head, legs, arms, back, and the center of his posterior. He has a belt with a window on his stomach so that the gas he uses can be seen.

Gutrot wears the Omnitrix symbol on what appears to be some kind of gas mask in front of his mouth. Personality : Gutrot has a cynical sense of humor and speaks with a gruff tone. Powers and Abilities: Gutrot's innards contain various gaseous elements, making him a walking chemical laboratory.
Being comprised mostly of gaseous chemicals on his insides, Gutrot has the ability to make compounds of almost any type and expel them as gas from the various nozzles on his body. Such gases include sulphur dioxide, (which can be used as a form of tear gas), nitrous oxide (laughing gas), and fluoromethyl-hexafluoro-isopropyl-ether (sevoflurane). This is normally used as an anesthetic, but is also useful as a knockout gas with short-term memory loss as an added side-effect. The strength of these gases depends on the amount expelled and their chemical makeup, but they are powerful enough to repel Dr. Animo's large mutated beasts.
Gutrot seems to possess an enhanced knowledge of the field of chemistry and its effects on the human body as he explains the gases' effects
Weaknesses: When Gutrot uses his gas, it makes a large cloud, which is susceptible to prevailing winds. This can endanger innocent bystanders.
Some of Gutrot's gases are flammable, so he must be careful in situations that might ignite them.
Opponents who are effectively shielded are immune to his gases, mainly through the use of a gas mask or insulation.

1/14/2014 c6 Winky Keaton
Hi there ,Here some ideas for cade shanley if can't make another then make a another crossover of him iwth some partner if you want to choose if you are thinking which parnter or family for him for his travel into another dimensions or journey like you did ben and cade in ben 10 crossover bleach add it to anothor crossover story and add a crossover story of
Cade Patrick Shanley to any kind of crossover to him like :Fairy Tail,High School DxD,
Sora no Otoshimono,To Love-Ru,Negima! Magister Negi Magi,Infinite Stratos,Rosario Vampire,
Soul Eater , Sekirei,one piece,Naruto,Wedding Peach,Familiar of Zero,Black Lagoon,teen titans,
Kingdom Hearts ,Touhou Project ,Kämpfer,Fullmetal Alchemist ,Fullmetal Alchemist Brotherhood,motto to love ru ,to love ru darkness,Future Diary,Katekyo Hitman Reborn!,Daily Life with a Monster Girl,aquarion evol,blazeblue and Demashitaa! Powerpuff Girls Z , so if you don't know those 29 crossover ideas look them up at google and read about it and pick which you like add make the crossover of cade shanley and if you like have ben as a parnter of cade for his journey or dimensions travel thats okay and here some aliens i want you when ben have in his omnitrix:Heatblast ,Wildmutt ,Diamondhead, XLR8, Grey Matter ,Four Arms, Stinkfly ,Ripjaws ,Upgrade ,Ghostfreak, Cannonbolt ,Wildvine ,Blitzwolfer, Snare-oh ,Frankenstrike ,Upchuck, Ditto,Eye Guy, Way Big,Swampfire,Echo Echo ,Humungousaur ,Jetray ,Big Chill, Chromastone ,Brainstorm, Spidermonkey ,Goop, Alien X, Lodestar ,Rath,Nanomech,Water Hazard ,Terraspin ,NRG ,Armodrillo ,AmpFibian ,Fasttrack, Clockwork, ChamAlien, Eatle ,Jury Rigg, Shocksquatch,Feedback ,Bloxx ,Gravattack ,Crashhopper, Articguana, Ball Weevil, Pesky Dust, Kickin Hawk ,Toepick, Astrodactyl, Bullfrag Atomix ,Buzzshock, and Spitter . and here the Ultimate Aliens for ben to evoled his aliens .Ultimate Swampfire Ultimate Spidermonkey ,Ultimate Big Chill ,Ultimate Humungousaur ,Ultimate Cannonbolt, Ultimate Echo Echo Ultimate Wildmutt ,Ultimate Way Big ,Ultimate Articguana and Ultimate do it please update another story or please update a new chapter 6 just now or next week, next month, or tomorrow just do it I know you msy can if i can wait. just make it happen okay ? good I'll give more ideas soon if you make a another story or another chapter 7 and no note or preview . just do it I can be amaze of you're writing and make it a long story and long chapter too . thank you and good bye !