
6/29/2013 c3 Guest
Oh. My. God. Is this story discontinued?
Oh. My. God. Is this story discontinued?
10/31/2011 c3 jia
i soooooooooo LOVE what you wrote! :D :D LOVE YOUR STORY! as far as i can remember, i think that this is my first time reading a story with such plot and i TOTALLY like it! it's kinda unpredictable and it's making me excited and thrilled to know what will happen next! :D :P soo love what you did with mikan and natsume's character! haha! I JUST LOVE NATSUME's REACTIONS! kya kya! i hope to see more of it! hope you update soon! i sooooo can't wait! haha! :D KYA! i want to know how things will unfold! haha! why is mikan hiding her beautiful self? and much much more! :D how will natsume now find mikan as? KYA! LOVE IT! i really hope that you'll update soon! THANK YOU! :D
i soooooooooo LOVE what you wrote! :D :D LOVE YOUR STORY! as far as i can remember, i think that this is my first time reading a story with such plot and i TOTALLY like it! it's kinda unpredictable and it's making me excited and thrilled to know what will happen next! :D :P soo love what you did with mikan and natsume's character! haha! I JUST LOVE NATSUME's REACTIONS! kya kya! i hope to see more of it! hope you update soon! i sooooo can't wait! haha! :D KYA! i want to know how things will unfold! haha! why is mikan hiding her beautiful self? and much much more! :D how will natsume now find mikan as? KYA! LOVE IT! i really hope that you'll update soon! THANK YOU! :D
10/31/2011 c3 Honki no Shika
Feels like it's been so long, or it is... =v=
I really enjoy reading this story because the plot makes people curious... I hope you'll update faster, I mean.. you're killing me with anticipation TAT
Feels like it's been so long, or it is... =v=
I really enjoy reading this story because the plot makes people curious... I hope you'll update faster, I mean.. you're killing me with anticipation TAT
10/29/2011 c3
10BananaManiaBubblegum
Woah...A Cinderella in the story, everyone!
I like it! A bit cliche, you know, the girl clad in mystery seducing a disguised man..
Though your twists to that plot are original and fresh! Keep it up!

Woah...A Cinderella in the story, everyone!
I like it! A bit cliche, you know, the girl clad in mystery seducing a disguised man..
Though your twists to that plot are original and fresh! Keep it up!
6/23/2011 c2
10BananaManiaBubblegum
I like it - it's mysterious. It's great how you manage to not spill the beans. Like, in other stories, It's mysterious 'till some chapter, in which the mysterious someone says it all and from then on, it's boring. I hope your story doesn't end like that.
Anyway, I love it and I can't wait for the next chapter.

I like it - it's mysterious. It's great how you manage to not spill the beans. Like, in other stories, It's mysterious 'till some chapter, in which the mysterious someone says it all and from then on, it's boring. I hope your story doesn't end like that.
Anyway, I love it and I can't wait for the next chapter.
6/22/2011 c2
1TheBlackRabbit
I'm really really confused so Mikan isn't really the bully but a victim aswell? Anyways great story :3

I'm really really confused so Mikan isn't really the bully but a victim aswell? Anyways great story :3
6/22/2011 c2 Guest
Plz update i want to know!
Plz update i want to know!
6/22/2011 c2 kuroneko
please update faster...
please update faster...
6/22/2011 c2
5XxpuffpuffxX
I can't believe Mikan is the bully. That makes me like SUPER sad. Something bad must have happened to Mikan for her to act like this right? Well, can't wait for update! XD

I can't believe Mikan is the bully. That makes me like SUPER sad. Something bad must have happened to Mikan for her to act like this right? Well, can't wait for update! XD
6/22/2011 c2 pinkpocket23
Oh mah gosh! This is a good one. Natsume cross dressing?
And to protect his sister Aoi. LOL wow, epic.
Please continue with updating^^
This makes me want to finish my fanfic. I love writing
about Natsume and Mikan. Again, awesome job!
Oh mah gosh! This is a good one. Natsume cross dressing?
And to protect his sister Aoi. LOL wow, epic.
Please continue with updating^^
This makes me want to finish my fanfic. I love writing
about Natsume and Mikan. Again, awesome job!