for My Pride is a Hurricane6/2/2011 c2 Savaros
i really liked this chapter can't wait for the big fight scenes! may i suggest maybe shikamaru or sai for teammates?
i really liked this chapter can't wait for the big fight scenes! may i suggest maybe shikamaru or sai for teammates?
5/31/2011 c1 
5exillion
This isn`t even naruto...wtf...this is just some OC borrowing the name naruto from another series...
wow...wait a go to cheapen get more reviews.
This might as well not be a crossover at all, in fact, it isn`t.
This is disappointing.
5exillionThis isn`t even naruto...wtf...this is just some OC borrowing the name naruto from another series...
wow...wait a go to cheapen get more reviews.
This might as well not be a crossover at all, in fact, it isn`t.
This is disappointing.
5/29/2011 c1 Sraiden
Naruto whitebead's grandson? heheh this really sounds interesting, I can't wait to see the crew he will have and the hell he will give in the marines HQ ! Update soon please! :)
Naruto whitebead's grandson? heheh this really sounds interesting, I can't wait to see the crew he will have and the hell he will give in the marines HQ ! Update soon please! :)
5/29/2011 c1 10Toshiro Ricky
That a lot of one story u have there neonzangetsu-san. . . Please keep the good work
10Toshiro RickyThat a lot of one story u have there neonzangetsu-san. . . Please keep the good work
5/26/2011 c1 8Kyubbiman
This story looks like it has lots of potential. Keep it up. Just don't god mod Naruto. It's nice to watch him struggle every now and then
8KyubbimanThis story looks like it has lots of potential. Keep it up. Just don't god mod Naruto. It's nice to watch him struggle every now and then
5/16/2011 c1 The Sad Reaper
Great first chapter. Makes me wonder what sasukes cursed fruit power is... Can't wait for the next chapter. Good luck.
Great first chapter. Makes me wonder what sasukes cursed fruit power is... Can't wait for the next chapter. Good luck.