for My Pride is a Hurricane5/4/2011 c1 
5Fox Boss
I plan on making something similar to this, only instead on an Impel Down prisoner, Naruto would be Pluton that Croc was looking for.
5Fox BossI plan on making something similar to this, only instead on an Impel Down prisoner, Naruto would be Pluton that Croc was looking for.
5/4/2011 c1 5Majin Hentai X
You do realize the one possessing the Kaze Kaze no mi is Monkey D. Dragon right?
Well at least you did have Naruto eat the Kitsu Kitsu no mi: Model Kyuubi no Yoko.
Sasuke better not have the sharingan, strong COO Haki I will accept but in the OP universe there in no haxing or trolling eyes.
5Majin Hentai XYou do realize the one possessing the Kaze Kaze no mi is Monkey D. Dragon right?
Well at least you did have Naruto eat the Kitsu Kitsu no mi: Model Kyuubi no Yoko.
Sasuke better not have the sharingan, strong COO Haki I will accept but in the OP universe there in no haxing or trolling eyes.
5/2/2011 c1 2Patsuki21
A very interesting story I know you can make this a great story but try to avoid over used concepts the kaze kaze fruit I'll let slide. Though as long as you avoid having naruto join luffy which I think is the direction your going you will be fine great and interesting so far
2Patsuki21A very interesting story I know you can make this a great story but try to avoid over used concepts the kaze kaze fruit I'll let slide. Though as long as you avoid having naruto join luffy which I think is the direction your going you will be fine great and interesting so far
5/2/2011 c1 Kampretzz
I think wind is one of the most powerful element. It can cut and push, intangible, invisible, create mirage and lightning (see Nami clima tact abilities), bend light, create tornado and whirlpool, and don't forget vacuum (by removing air), extinguish fire (fire won't last without air), freeze stuff and control stuff on air (such as sand, water, knifes, etc). I'm sure there are more stuff wind/air can do, so do your best improving Naruto.
I think wind is one of the most powerful element. It can cut and push, intangible, invisible, create mirage and lightning (see Nami clima tact abilities), bend light, create tornado and whirlpool, and don't forget vacuum (by removing air), extinguish fire (fire won't last without air), freeze stuff and control stuff on air (such as sand, water, knifes, etc). I'm sure there are more stuff wind/air can do, so do your best improving Naruto.
5/2/2011 c1 3Lazy Ronin Ryumori
The air msnipulation curses fruit ability is a little more that overused, but I still like the story. One thing I would like to see change, in all of your newer stories, is less description on the little things. For instance in one of your stories you used like have the chapter describing Hinata waking up Naruto. I think its great in all that you can writing that much on something so trivial, but I believe I can speak for most when I say that this partially bores and some times confuses your readers.
3Lazy Ronin RyumoriThe air msnipulation curses fruit ability is a little more that overused, but I still like the story. One thing I would like to see change, in all of your newer stories, is less description on the little things. For instance in one of your stories you used like have the chapter describing Hinata waking up Naruto. I think its great in all that you can writing that much on something so trivial, but I believe I can speak for most when I say that this partially bores and some times confuses your readers.
5/1/2011 c1 9CaptureGod-Otamegane
kind of an off the wall story but it seems like it would be interesting.
9CaptureGod-Otameganekind of an off the wall story but it seems like it would be interesting.
5/1/2011 c1 SpeeDemon
Well I am kinda confused where your going to go with this but this only the first chapter so can't wait til the next one.
Well I am kinda confused where your going to go with this but this only the first chapter so can't wait til the next one.
5/1/2011 c1 Maelstorm of the Tricky Wind
i like it but cause u have so many storys ur inconsistant with updates so u better update this 1
i like it but cause u have so many storys ur inconsistant with updates so u better update this 1
5/1/2011 c1 Scyth3
Hmm very interesting there! Not the first time I've seen Naruto with the wind fruit and all, but definitely a first seeing him like this. Interesting character really. Would like to see more of this fic. Am wondering what Madara has to do with all this.
Hmm very interesting there! Not the first time I've seen Naruto with the wind fruit and all, but definitely a first seeing him like this. Interesting character really. Would like to see more of this fic. Am wondering what Madara has to do with all this.
4/30/2011 c1 Jack
Who you going make Naruto fight at the Whitebeard War. How are the Marine' and Pirates reaction is going be when they see him. That I really want know.
Who you going make Naruto fight at the Whitebeard War. How are the Marine' and Pirates reaction is going be when they see him. That I really want know.
4/30/2011 c1 2FlyingArtist
Pretty good, I can't wait to find out Sasuke's devil fruit is! Try to get over your acursed sickness and please try to update soon! Ja~
2FlyingArtistPretty good, I can't wait to find out Sasuke's devil fruit is! Try to get over your acursed sickness and please try to update soon! Ja~
4/30/2011 c1 RoyalTwinFangs
I woulder how big his ship is going to be. Big like one of the Buster Call.
I woulder how big his ship is going to be. Big like one of the Buster Call.
4/30/2011 c1 This guy
Kick ass man, this looks like a legend in the making already
Kick ass man, this looks like a legend in the making already