for My Pride is a Hurricane4/30/2011 c1 lightningblade49
well this is certainly interesting.
well this is certainly interesting.
4/29/2011 c1 Jicea
Whoa this is a new spin on things and I must say I enjoy it. This crossover has never been done like this before and I love the idea, and cant wait to see Naruto at full strength. Also I REALLY hope Hinanta WILL NOT be in this one. It is your story of course but it would just be nice to read a harem storu for once without Hinanta in it. Anyways love the idea for this and cant wait for the update.
Whoa this is a new spin on things and I must say I enjoy it. This crossover has never been done like this before and I love the idea, and cant wait to see Naruto at full strength. Also I REALLY hope Hinanta WILL NOT be in this one. It is your story of course but it would just be nice to read a harem storu for once without Hinanta in it. Anyways love the idea for this and cant wait for the update.
4/29/2011 c1 
1Shadow of a Life
A very interesting chapter. I'm looking forward to reading more of this story
1Shadow of a LifeA very interesting chapter. I'm looking forward to reading more of this story
4/29/2011 c1 Takai153
This looks epic! I can't wait for more. Keep up the awesome work and please update as soon as you can!
This looks epic! I can't wait for more. Keep up the awesome work and please update as soon as you can!
4/29/2011 c1 nooneond
Oooooo this looks like the start of
Something amazing, whitebeards grandson hope they have a talk at thr very least and good fruit choice for naruto
Im interested in seeing how akatsuki affect the story
Who else is in the crew?
O and whats the pairing, personally i wouldnt mind jewelery bonney, hehehe they can have a food eating contest at least that would be pretty funny
Any ways nice story hope you update soon
Oooooo this looks like the start of
Something amazing, whitebeards grandson hope they have a talk at thr very least and good fruit choice for naruto
Im interested in seeing how akatsuki affect the story
Who else is in the crew?
O and whats the pairing, personally i wouldnt mind jewelery bonney, hehehe they can have a food eating contest at least that would be pretty funny
Any ways nice story hope you update soon
4/29/2011 c1 Rakugosha
This is freakin' amazing! I really, REALLY hope you decide to continue this on a frequent basis. Good Naruto/One Piece fics are hard to find, and honestly I think this is the best one I've read thus far.
I've always though about trying my hand at starting Naruto off in Impel Down for a fic, but I've never written before and don't think I would do it justice.
You, however, and pulling it together spectacularly. I particularly like Naruto's ability, and his heritage. Ecstatic about that, quite frankly. Was pretty sad when Whitebeard died, he was BAD ASS.
Curious as to who all you'll be including in the crew and how large it will be. Will it be all of the ragtag team of Naruto's friends? Or just a few key more important ones? Plus then there's Madara setting Naruto free and the Akatsuki.
I'm psyched! I can't wait for more! I'm avidly looking forward to your next chapter.
-Raku
This is freakin' amazing! I really, REALLY hope you decide to continue this on a frequent basis. Good Naruto/One Piece fics are hard to find, and honestly I think this is the best one I've read thus far.
I've always though about trying my hand at starting Naruto off in Impel Down for a fic, but I've never written before and don't think I would do it justice.
You, however, and pulling it together spectacularly. I particularly like Naruto's ability, and his heritage. Ecstatic about that, quite frankly. Was pretty sad when Whitebeard died, he was BAD ASS.
Curious as to who all you'll be including in the crew and how large it will be. Will it be all of the ragtag team of Naruto's friends? Or just a few key more important ones? Plus then there's Madara setting Naruto free and the Akatsuki.
I'm psyched! I can't wait for more! I'm avidly looking forward to your next chapter.
-Raku
4/29/2011 c1 5Orchamus
Now this is a fic! I love it already! And the Kaze no Yaiba? Nice. Though Madara's actions confuse me.
5OrchamusNow this is a fic! I love it already! And the Kaze no Yaiba? Nice. Though Madara's actions confuse me.
4/29/2011 c1 Falvern
I like the story idea. However, I must say that I am disappointed with Naruto's devil fruit power. Giving him the Kaze Kaze Fruit was an extreme disappointment in my opinion. Given how unique Naruto is in the some of your other stories, I had expected you to come up with something better. Especially since Whitebeard is Naruto's grandfather. I had expected him to have a truly unique and badass devil fruit like him. A good majority of the Naruto/One Piece stories seem to give him the same abilities, and the same devil fruit. Naruto controlling wind has truly become cliche, even if it is cannon. As it stands, I don't think I'll read this story any further. I wish you luck with it though. I do hope that you get better soon.
I like the story idea. However, I must say that I am disappointed with Naruto's devil fruit power. Giving him the Kaze Kaze Fruit was an extreme disappointment in my opinion. Given how unique Naruto is in the some of your other stories, I had expected you to come up with something better. Especially since Whitebeard is Naruto's grandfather. I had expected him to have a truly unique and badass devil fruit like him. A good majority of the Naruto/One Piece stories seem to give him the same abilities, and the same devil fruit. Naruto controlling wind has truly become cliche, even if it is cannon. As it stands, I don't think I'll read this story any further. I wish you luck with it though. I do hope that you get better soon.