for My Pride is a Hurricane4/29/2011 c1 roshane
whoa! i can't wait to see the next chapter! this fic is really interesting, does naruto get any genetic abilities being whitebeards grandson like super strenght?
whoa! i can't wait to see the next chapter! this fic is really interesting, does naruto get any genetic abilities being whitebeards grandson like super strenght?
4/29/2011 c1 5-digit
Story is great, never seen a N/OP crossover where Naruto starts off as a level 6 impel down prisoner bad @ss. I only spotted a few spelling errors but what's a typo compared to a good story?
But can I be blunt? This is most likely just another one of your stories that won't see an update for another 3 months if at all. The problem is you keep coming up with new stories and aren't focusing on the ones you already have. For example (keep in mind, JUST an EXAMPLE), The True King hasn't seen an update since last year, in September. I'm seeing all these great story ideas on your profile and most of them only have one chapter, and they aren't even one-shots.
So like I said great story idea and I would love to see it continue, but I'm not exactly holding my breath for an update anytime soon... if any.
Story is great, never seen a N/OP crossover where Naruto starts off as a level 6 impel down prisoner bad @ss. I only spotted a few spelling errors but what's a typo compared to a good story?
But can I be blunt? This is most likely just another one of your stories that won't see an update for another 3 months if at all. The problem is you keep coming up with new stories and aren't focusing on the ones you already have. For example (keep in mind, JUST an EXAMPLE), The True King hasn't seen an update since last year, in September. I'm seeing all these great story ideas on your profile and most of them only have one chapter, and they aren't even one-shots.
So like I said great story idea and I would love to see it continue, but I'm not exactly holding my breath for an update anytime soon... if any.
4/29/2011 c1 
25917brat
this sounds complety amazing please keep it up and update it again real soon because I would love to see where you are going to go with this story.
25917bratthis sounds complety amazing please keep it up and update it again real soon because I would love to see where you are going to go with this story.
4/29/2011 c1 Death From Above
This Is A good story, as all of yours seem to be. i have a question, do yout plan to update any of your other stories anytime soon? i've been waiting on path of peace and beyond the shadows for awhile now. apply your awesomesauce and update soon please!
This Is A good story, as all of yours seem to be. i have a question, do yout plan to update any of your other stories anytime soon? i've been waiting on path of peace and beyond the shadows for awhile now. apply your awesomesauce and update soon please!
4/29/2011 c1 exeafirm
Interesting story,I like it and I think Blackbeard has ben screwed because Naruto is going to leave with Level 6 strongest.I hate Blackbeard and akainu and would like to see at leats one them beaten by the end of the war by Naruto.
Are you going to give Blackbeard the Gura Gura no mi?.You could have Naruto save Whitebeard or at least gaining the Gura Gura no mi instead of Blackbeard,you could have him gaining it by stoping Blackbeard's unknown process of extraction when his crew concealed him and Whitebeard's corpse or something, would like to see Blackbeards plans fucked.
Interesting story,I like it and I think Blackbeard has ben screwed because Naruto is going to leave with Level 6 strongest.I hate Blackbeard and akainu and would like to see at leats one them beaten by the end of the war by Naruto.
Are you going to give Blackbeard the Gura Gura no mi?.You could have Naruto save Whitebeard or at least gaining the Gura Gura no mi instead of Blackbeard,you could have him gaining it by stoping Blackbeard's unknown process of extraction when his crew concealed him and Whitebeard's corpse or something, would like to see Blackbeards plans fucked.
4/29/2011 c1 Zero Gawain
good is a good story, I just hope they do not leave or pauses as your other 185.
I hope to update soon.
good is a good story, I just hope they do not leave or pauses as your other 185.
I hope to update soon.
4/29/2011 c1 axl88x
Great idea for a story. I look forward to reading future chapters if you continue this. I wish you luck in dealing with your health issues.
Great idea for a story. I look forward to reading future chapters if you continue this. I wish you luck in dealing with your health issues.
4/29/2011 c1 4XPGamer
wow, you've made some half-assed crappy fics before but this one takes the cake.
you shit all over Luffy's character and your grammar has been steadily going down hill over the last five fics you've put out culminating in this recent crap.
It was a good idea but you went about it horribly.
4XPGamerwow, you've made some half-assed crappy fics before but this one takes the cake.
you shit all over Luffy's character and your grammar has been steadily going down hill over the last five fics you've put out culminating in this recent crap.
It was a good idea but you went about it horribly.