for A Loose Connection9/4/2018 c8 Guest
This story would have been soooo much better if M hadn’t still been a racist. All his mudblood this, dirty blood that when he spoke of H put me off so much. He even said shit about halfbloods even though his daughter is one. This ignorant mentality didn’t become an arch for his character as he still seemed to be prejudice at the end of the last chapter... only managing to perform some mental gymnastics to excluding H and his daughter from his racist views. Idk if it b/c I’m a poc and as a result overly sensitive to racism(even in this absurdly fictional sense) all of this made it hard for me to feel like these two should be together. I also disliked how much of an ass he was when she told him about her sexual assault...but that’s a completely different can of worms. Sometimes i just feel like quitting Dramione... so many of the fics either glorify disfunction in relationship or make light of racism... I don’t want to discourage u though. Ur story was well written and very easy to get through aside from what I previously mentioned. Its just that this story is not for me... and maybe this whole ship isn’t either. Lol
This story would have been soooo much better if M hadn’t still been a racist. All his mudblood this, dirty blood that when he spoke of H put me off so much. He even said shit about halfbloods even though his daughter is one. This ignorant mentality didn’t become an arch for his character as he still seemed to be prejudice at the end of the last chapter... only managing to perform some mental gymnastics to excluding H and his daughter from his racist views. Idk if it b/c I’m a poc and as a result overly sensitive to racism(even in this absurdly fictional sense) all of this made it hard for me to feel like these two should be together. I also disliked how much of an ass he was when she told him about her sexual assault...but that’s a completely different can of worms. Sometimes i just feel like quitting Dramione... so many of the fics either glorify disfunction in relationship or make light of racism... I don’t want to discourage u though. Ur story was well written and very easy to get through aside from what I previously mentioned. Its just that this story is not for me... and maybe this whole ship isn’t either. Lol
11/12/2015 c8 Guest
Do the others (especially Narcissa) ever find out that Lucius is the real father?
Do the others (especially Narcissa) ever find out that Lucius is the real father?
11/12/2015 c8 Guest
What was in the letter?
What was in the letter?
9/21/2015 c8 Guest
great story :)
great story :)
7/28/2014 c8 Elluzions
I loved Draco in this fic! His characterization and interaction with both Hermione and their daughter was precious. Thanks for sharing!
I loved Draco in this fic! His characterization and interaction with both Hermione and their daughter was precious. Thanks for sharing!
8/24/2013 c8 skari
Lol, this story was amazing, sweet, well written and just as a dramione should be. I really really liked it.
Lol, this story was amazing, sweet, well written and just as a dramione should be. I really really liked it.
1/17/2013 c2 
4EStrunk
So that wasn't what I expected. I like Draco's observations on the damage that was done to his parents' relationship. Another vicious Weasley. Although at least they do have a reason.
4EStrunkSo that wasn't what I expected. I like Draco's observations on the damage that was done to his parents' relationship. Another vicious Weasley. Although at least they do have a reason.
1/17/2013 c1 EStrunk
Oh - wow! A lot happened there. Ron was a total jerk - although I loved the drama of having him blow up the tree. I like Draco's "how long" questions.
Oh - wow! A lot happened there. Ron was a total jerk - although I loved the drama of having him blow up the tree. I like Draco's "how long" questions.