for Mad Kagome12/11/2015 c1 Guest
Update more please!
Update more please!
9/8/2014 c1 Guest
I hope you dont realize all the innuendo u put in this story
I hope you dont realize all the innuendo u put in this story
10/30/2012 c2 
9Jasmine Melody
What THE HELL! One-shot my arse! There's no end. Of all the nerve. What is wrong with you! Here I expect to read a really good story and I get this! *fumes furiously* No ending, of all the ridiculous things. A story must have a beginning (which was well written and funny) MIDDLE AND END! There's no middle or end! Just the start of a really great story.
*Glares* If you are going to write a one shot then write one that doesn't piss people off! This story has such a great wealth of potential for making a fabulous story and you throw it down the drain but leaving it like that!
*sighs* Look I'm not saying that your story sucked because it didn't. It was well thought out and well written. However nothing make my blood boil then to read a unfinished story. That's why I read only completed ones. Nothing makes me happier then sinking my teeth into a great story and yours I was all set to enjoy when it ends... Can you understand my frustration! If you need idea's I am chalk full of them. Just ask if you stuck but don't leave such a promising story like that unfinished.
9Jasmine MelodyWhat THE HELL! One-shot my arse! There's no end. Of all the nerve. What is wrong with you! Here I expect to read a really good story and I get this! *fumes furiously* No ending, of all the ridiculous things. A story must have a beginning (which was well written and funny) MIDDLE AND END! There's no middle or end! Just the start of a really great story.
*Glares* If you are going to write a one shot then write one that doesn't piss people off! This story has such a great wealth of potential for making a fabulous story and you throw it down the drain but leaving it like that!
*sighs* Look I'm not saying that your story sucked because it didn't. It was well thought out and well written. However nothing make my blood boil then to read a unfinished story. That's why I read only completed ones. Nothing makes me happier then sinking my teeth into a great story and yours I was all set to enjoy when it ends... Can you understand my frustration! If you need idea's I am chalk full of them. Just ask if you stuck but don't leave such a promising story like that unfinished.
5/29/2012 c2 redheadedbishonenlvr86
First I want to say that this is a great starting point for a story and will hopefully get other author's plot bunnies to be more productive. That said it's kind of open-ended for a one shot.
Also,
I'm not saying this to be a jerk. I totally respect your decision not to continue this story. However, if it is meant to be a one-shot and you don't want people to ask for more you should probably remove this line from the beginning of the first chapter:
"For every one who wants me to make a new chapter R&R I need at least three reviews to continue."
Again, I am not trying to be annoying, just trying to cut down on the confusion. :)
First I want to say that this is a great starting point for a story and will hopefully get other author's plot bunnies to be more productive. That said it's kind of open-ended for a one shot.
Also,
I'm not saying this to be a jerk. I totally respect your decision not to continue this story. However, if it is meant to be a one-shot and you don't want people to ask for more you should probably remove this line from the beginning of the first chapter:
"For every one who wants me to make a new chapter R&R I need at least three reviews to continue."
Again, I am not trying to be annoying, just trying to cut down on the confusion. :)
4/6/2012 c2 28o0KittyBlue0o
o.O for a oneshot you just left it off pretty well-it has no definitive end at all, not even an entire reasoning behind posting it really. This is NOT meant as a flame, btw, simply confused as why there isn't actually more-it was rushed, but it was amusing. If you actually worked on it a little more, slowed down the tale, you'd have a wonderful story on your hands-though it does follow the all powerful kagome fics, it'd be highly amusing.
28o0KittyBlue0oo.O for a oneshot you just left it off pretty well-it has no definitive end at all, not even an entire reasoning behind posting it really. This is NOT meant as a flame, btw, simply confused as why there isn't actually more-it was rushed, but it was amusing. If you actually worked on it a little more, slowed down the tale, you'd have a wonderful story on your hands-though it does follow the all powerful kagome fics, it'd be highly amusing.
3/31/2012 c2 2Cosmic-lover
Aww it's too bad that you won't be updating this but good luck in writing your newest story :)
2Cosmic-loverAww it's too bad that you won't be updating this but good luck in writing your newest story :)