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11/15/2015 c8 Kira
Omg so sad. Poor Vegeta! It was an amazing story tho
8/28/2015 c8 poprockpony
Wow.I got so mad at Goku and I love this story it reminds me of the one I'm working on. The parts with Vegeta crying I cryed because you did such a good job putting detail please finish!
8/16/2015 c8 Tom5250
I'm sorry I didn't even ask to do this but here
I go

After a few mins of flying goku had caught up with vegeta and asked him why he had cried and flied off like that and vegeta said to fuck off and never come back and when goku heard this all he did was stop and flew off in the opposite and vegeta could hear him crying his eyes out he felt bad but didn't stop flying and when he got home every one came to vegeta and asked what had happened and all vegeta said that he and the girls had to leave right now and he got the girls things and left

Months after what had happened between vegeta and goku vegeta got a phone call and a man answered the phone and told him that there was an accident and that he needed to get to the hospital as soon as possible and vegeta thought that one of the girls had gotten hurt so he took off and went to the hopsital and asked the doctor what happened and said that his husband tried to commit suicide and that he is on life support and vegeta was all to happy to hear this and asked if he could see him and the doctor reluctantly agreed and took vegeta to goku's room

When vegeta got there he could see that goku was expecting him and was already watching the door and as soon as that doctor left vegeta made an energy blast and goku started to cry and vegeta the state that he was in was almost like a trance and wanted to get back at goku for all the things that goku had done to him after a few moments vegeta realized what he was doing and stopped and all that he could do was look at goku and had anger,hate,discussed and goku now looks terrified at how vegeta was looking at him goku was able to get the covering off him mouth and asked vegeta what he was doing there in discuss vegeta said that according to the law there still married and that the doctors had to call him and goku was surprised goku asked him if he was still willing to get back together and vegeta said no in a harsh voice and goku started to cry as goku slow lifted his hand to his face and made and energy blast and shoot him self and vegeta happy out of his wits broke the window and flew away

MEANWHILE IN OTHERWORLD

As goku cut in line and talked to king Yema goku asked if he can go to king Kia's plant and king yema asked goku why he commuted suicide and goku got mad and just flew away ad stopped a few hundred yards away and made and energy sphere and shoot it towards the sorting station king yema watched in horror as the blast instantly destroyed the sorting station and goku laughed like a maniac and flew to king kias planet king Kia amazed at how goku was behaving and hid when goku got there he could sense that king Kia was hiding from him and goku searching every and found him in his house underneath his bed and asked him why he was hiding then king Kia freaked out and goku got mad and killed him again and king Kia ceased to exist finally vegeta dies during his battle with someone from his past and goku there waiting for him vegeta still discussed asked what had happened to the sorting station and goku told him had destroyed it when he first got there and vegeta terrified as goku came closer to him and pulled him to him and asked if the girls are ok vegeta said that they both just finished high school and are really great fighters and vegeta tried to pull away but goku held him and started to cry an asked him to forgive him vegeta asked him if will will change his ways and he said he will and if he didn't goku said he'll kill himself again and cease to exist and vegeta agreed and they lived on the deceased king Kia's planet until there daughters finally died and joined them while they lived on the little planet they both got to super sayian 4 and with goku and vegeta overwhelmed with joy they live there for the rest of all time and goku never hurting vegeta or the girls ever again

THE END
3/3/2014 c8 justin
Try and end it with a happy ending O.K.
7/8/2013 c3 1vishous21
awesome
5/15/2013 c8 2cara9001
Poor Vegeta and it was a great chapter
5/10/2013 c7 Monita
I love what you're writing this story is so different from the usual lovey, dovey stuff that I read. Suggestion why can't Goku use the dragon balls to wish the abusiveness out of him. Love it and keep writing
5/5/2013 c7 1pallyndrome
Try to write for yourself and your own enjoyment. If you write for good reviews you are going to be disappointed. Just one thing from a writer to a writer :)
5/5/2013 c7 2cara9001
YAY you're back!
11/12/2012 c6 Guest
Make goku wake up and realise that he is not himself let him suffer alittle bit id say about A month and make him say sorry and if they didnt believe him hed leave and they could be happy with out him hed understamd and him walk out the door and make it half way before he fall down crying then get up and say goodbye then leave and then vegeta comes back to him after another week amd they fix their relasionship
11/11/2012 c6 Guest
Make goku wake up and realise that he is not himself let him suffer alittle bit id say about A month and make him say sorry and if they didnt believe him hed leave and they could be happy with out him hed understamd and him walk out the door and make it half way before he fall down crying then get up and say goodbye then leave and then vegeta comes back to him after another week amd they fix their relasionship
11/2/2012 c6 Snookster
Whenever I Think Of Vegeta As A Wife It Sends Me Into A Fit Of Giggles. Poor Girls, Having To Witness That. :(
9/11/2012 c1 Guest
It's great but it should have more lemon :) and you should put a scene where vegeta finds Bulma attractive again :) it would be good drama for the story and interesting to say the least
8/7/2012 c6 Yvonne
Please update. I want to see what happens with vegeta and gokus relationship
7/24/2012 c6 Googoodolls
UPDATE!
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