for Continuing the Cycle5/22/2017 c15 StoneTheLoner
What was the point of this chapter? I feel like you were stuck in a rut where you couldn't imagine anything happening other than Harry feeling pain at one thing or another. I'm serious, literally nothing else is happening in regards to Harry's character. He goes to the bathroom, and he remembers some stuff that hurts him. He goes outside and later remembers some more stuff, leading him to start hurting himself physically. People come to talk to him afterwords, and it makes him remember even more stuff... Then things look like they are changing and what happens? He remembers stuff, falls unconscious, wakes up and makes some stupid decision leading to him going somewhere he shouldn't have, only for something entirely new to start hurting him... There. Is. Literally. Nothing. Else. Happening.
What was the point of this chapter? I feel like you were stuck in a rut where you couldn't imagine anything happening other than Harry feeling pain at one thing or another. I'm serious, literally nothing else is happening in regards to Harry's character. He goes to the bathroom, and he remembers some stuff that hurts him. He goes outside and later remembers some more stuff, leading him to start hurting himself physically. People come to talk to him afterwords, and it makes him remember even more stuff... Then things look like they are changing and what happens? He remembers stuff, falls unconscious, wakes up and makes some stupid decision leading to him going somewhere he shouldn't have, only for something entirely new to start hurting him... There. Is. Literally. Nothing. Else. Happening.
5/22/2017 c12 StoneTheLoner
There's the olive branch I needed when ranting at the story the first time around. Glad to know this is only the low point, but it sucks there's only 7 chapters left and you never got around to part 2.
There's the olive branch I needed when ranting at the story the first time around. Glad to know this is only the low point, but it sucks there's only 7 chapters left and you never got around to part 2.
5/16/2017 c1 
8MelonLordOfMelons
Okay so please correct me if im wrong. I belive Harry stayed in the village was the part of himself trying to stay human. He might have realized deep down that Dumbledore didnt mean to allow Voldemort to do all of that thinking he was dead and in a way is giving the people of his past life a second chance as he drew a parallel to Dumbledore with the Kazekage. He may also draw parallels with himself and Naruto in the future I belive with how Naruto you s seen as less than human for things he cant control. The worst thing anyone can do to Harry right now is lie to him or hurt one of his snakes. He has a certain hate for people who do those things.
Birdie... ; A;
8MelonLordOfMelonsOkay so please correct me if im wrong. I belive Harry stayed in the village was the part of himself trying to stay human. He might have realized deep down that Dumbledore didnt mean to allow Voldemort to do all of that thinking he was dead and in a way is giving the people of his past life a second chance as he drew a parallel to Dumbledore with the Kazekage. He may also draw parallels with himself and Naruto in the future I belive with how Naruto you s seen as less than human for things he cant control. The worst thing anyone can do to Harry right now is lie to him or hurt one of his snakes. He has a certain hate for people who do those things.
Birdie... ; A;
5/13/2017 c19 Dedicated Reader
So I've been checking this fic to see if it had updated for a year now, and I'm just wondering, when will you update? This fic is really good and honestly I'm pretty sad that this hadn't been updated yet. Looking forward to the day when you'd finally update this.
So I've been checking this fic to see if it had updated for a year now, and I'm just wondering, when will you update? This fic is really good and honestly I'm pretty sad that this hadn't been updated yet. Looking forward to the day when you'd finally update this.
5/8/2017 c3 1Magnanimous Broccoli
now i normally don't like harry is orochimaru fics, but i think this one might be the exception.
1Magnanimous Broccolinow i normally don't like harry is orochimaru fics, but i think this one might be the exception.
4/21/2017 c19 Guest
1Yr 12D
1Yr 12D
4/20/2017 c19 Dudesaurus
Dude, sudden thought, what if Harry made some kunai-portkeys? O' the chaos he could bring, the godawful fun!
Dude, sudden thought, what if Harry made some kunai-portkeys? O' the chaos he could bring, the godawful fun!
4/15/2017 c19 Ohkmiku
Oh fuck no!
Please continue!
Oh fuck no!
Please continue!
4/10/2017 c15 NouvelleVoix
I'm enjoying this story thus far, but I gotta say I'm getting really sick of Harry not being able to think. It makes following what he's doing and/or plotting nearly impossible.
I'm enjoying this story thus far, but I gotta say I'm getting really sick of Harry not being able to think. It makes following what he's doing and/or plotting nearly impossible.
4/9/2017 c19 Helily
I assure you I can wait 20 years if needed for you to finish this. It is well worth it.
Found this just yesterday. Have been enthralled ever since. O.O. Enthralled I tell you! Never a dull moment, never a lack of excitement, of intrigue. I so wish to see what happens next.
I too wish to see Birdy avenged. Totally rooting for Harry to kill that Kabuto. I might be having way too much fun reading this :D Heheheh. But damn Jiraiya. So annoying! Ugh. Anyway. Oh yes, and I was so happy when Harry learned/remembered(?) unassisted flight. That is just one of my favorite abilities that Voldemort mastered. Seriously, why did everyone else suck so horribly? Lol. Ah well.
Really curious what the meeting will be like when Harry and Orochimaru actually meet finally. *snicker*. That should be fun _
Looking forward to whatever you come up with! Thank you and good luck!
I assure you I can wait 20 years if needed for you to finish this. It is well worth it.
Found this just yesterday. Have been enthralled ever since. O.O. Enthralled I tell you! Never a dull moment, never a lack of excitement, of intrigue. I so wish to see what happens next.
I too wish to see Birdy avenged. Totally rooting for Harry to kill that Kabuto. I might be having way too much fun reading this :D Heheheh. But damn Jiraiya. So annoying! Ugh. Anyway. Oh yes, and I was so happy when Harry learned/remembered(?) unassisted flight. That is just one of my favorite abilities that Voldemort mastered. Seriously, why did everyone else suck so horribly? Lol. Ah well.
Really curious what the meeting will be like when Harry and Orochimaru actually meet finally. *snicker*. That should be fun _
Looking forward to whatever you come up with! Thank you and good luck!
4/9/2017 c2 ebbuu
Re-reading this story still very much the good shit I remember it being, best of luck on your education or whatever your doing and hopefully you will finish this piece of kick ass awesomeness eventually. Best of wishes mah dude/dudess or whatever you like to associate as, till next time.
Re-reading this story still very much the good shit I remember it being, best of luck on your education or whatever your doing and hopefully you will finish this piece of kick ass awesomeness eventually. Best of wishes mah dude/dudess or whatever you like to associate as, till next time.
4/4/2017 c19 SlyFam
First fanfic I ever fell for. This one is crazy good.
First fanfic I ever fell for. This one is crazy good.
3/21/2017 c19 SkylerKeas
Please update soon! I just reread this story for the fifth time and I still love it. I really want to see where you're heading with this and hope that you aren't giving up on it.
Please update soon! I just reread this story for the fifth time and I still love it. I really want to see where you're heading with this and hope that you aren't giving up on it.
3/16/2017 c19 lunamoon531
Omg, the first time I read this beautiful story I was at a friends house on their laptop cause my phone died and I loved it like my cat and I loved it like I love ice-cream, but then when I got back home i'd forgotten the name of this fic and I basically died from my own stupidity for not writing it down when I know I have a horrible memory. But now, here I am having somehow found this fic again and re-reading it just to make sure that this piece of wonderfulness is real and not just a dream.
Hope you update soon, but no worries, I will trust your word when you say you'll finish this :D
Omg, the first time I read this beautiful story I was at a friends house on their laptop cause my phone died and I loved it like my cat and I loved it like I love ice-cream, but then when I got back home i'd forgotten the name of this fic and I basically died from my own stupidity for not writing it down when I know I have a horrible memory. But now, here I am having somehow found this fic again and re-reading it just to make sure that this piece of wonderfulness is real and not just a dream.
Hope you update soon, but no worries, I will trust your word when you say you'll finish this :D