for My Sister's Keeper1/4 c4 Guest
it has been 10 years
it has been 10 years
10/11/2018 c4 me
Please right another chapter soon
Please right another chapter soon
1/27/2016 c4 
16xCrystalCherryx
I like it, but it's been what, four years since you last updated? Mm hm, I like the story, but I don't know when you're going to write the next chapter so yeah... but PLEASE! UPDATE!
16xCrystalCherryxI like it, but it's been what, four years since you last updated? Mm hm, I like the story, but I don't know when you're going to write the next chapter so yeah... but PLEASE! UPDATE!
8/21/2015 c4 2ZE Bri-0n
That awkward moment, when you realize that the Demon Prince likes you more than your own family does.
2ZE Bri-0nThat awkward moment, when you realize that the Demon Prince likes you more than your own family does.
6/27/2015 c4 Guest
Is Eragon going to be in this.?
Is Eragon going to be in this.?
7/24/2013 c3 Guest
AWESOME! BEST CHAP I'VE EVER READ!
AWESOME! BEST CHAP I'VE EVER READ!
12/11/2012 c4 Ellie
I need more
I need more
6/10/2012 c4 1moonshadowisnotdead
Well, if Navarog commands it...haha, anyways, this is really awesome, and you should definitely continue this! I love The Inheritance Cycle, and I love Fablehaven, so this is doubly epic XD
Is any other characters from tIC going to show up? Like, -ahem- Eragon? heh, I love him...
So...pweez continue? Even though it's been, like, two months? Somewhere around there...this is really good, keep it up!
1moonshadowisnotdeadWell, if Navarog commands it...haha, anyways, this is really awesome, and you should definitely continue this! I love The Inheritance Cycle, and I love Fablehaven, so this is doubly epic XD
Is any other characters from tIC going to show up? Like, -ahem- Eragon? heh, I love him...
So...pweez continue? Even though it's been, like, two months? Somewhere around there...this is really good, keep it up!
3/29/2012 c4 3GreatIceDragon
Hooray! An update! By the way, will any of the others in the Eragon cast make an appearance? Besides Durza, that is.
3GreatIceDragonHooray! An update! By the way, will any of the others in the Eragon cast make an appearance? Besides Durza, that is.
3/25/2012 c3 GreatIceDragon
Awwww...come on! You haven't updated since 2011? You should be ashamed... But seriously, this is really good and you should update soon.
Awwww...come on! You haven't updated since 2011? You should be ashamed... But seriously, this is really good and you should update soon.
8/11/2011 c3 hhhhhhyyeah
Funny. Im not in any magical places (or Burger King), despite having pushed the button. I guess the story makes sense, though it is mildly confuzing. Ill be intterested to see where it goes.
Funny. Im not in any magical places (or Burger King), despite having pushed the button. I guess the story makes sense, though it is mildly confuzing. Ill be intterested to see where it goes.
7/30/2011 c3 blahblahblibbityblah
cool!
but that isn't like Gravin
oh i dont like burger king by the way.
but awsome story!
cool!
but that isn't like Gravin
oh i dont like burger king by the way.
but awsome story!
7/15/2011 c3 Guest
I'm so mad at you! I'm not in Burger King!
The story, right. Why the heck did I laugh like crazy when they were getting out the crossbow? o.O
I like it so far, it's funny, and Navarog being a smarta$$ to Bracken cracked me up. It's great! Keep on writing!
I'm so mad at you! I'm not in Burger King!
The story, right. Why the heck did I laugh like crazy when they were getting out the crossbow? o.O
I like it so far, it's funny, and Navarog being a smarta$$ to Bracken cracked me up. It's great! Keep on writing!