for A Different Ending4/18/2015 c16 
1JetLikeTheJewel
Yes! MACHINA IS ALIVE! YAY!
...please keep it that way. I'm keeping my fingers crossed, here.
1JetLikeTheJewelYes! MACHINA IS ALIVE! YAY!
...please keep it that way. I'm keeping my fingers crossed, here.
4/16/2015 c16 Christinatewart
Wow! I honestly didn't expect that.
*cough cough* I LOVE ASHGAN! *cough cough*
Wow! I honestly didn't expect that.
*cough cough* I LOVE ASHGAN! *cough cough*
4/16/2015 c16 Angie
OMG HALLELUJAH I KNEW MACHINA COULDN'T BE DEAD I KNEW IT! Ahh you totally just made my day and I love you for this and I love your story even more than I thought possible. I'm sorry you had to put up with all my fantasies but after reading the iron daughter I felt like there were so many loose ends and better possible endings. Now we can finally see the relationship develop between Machina and Meghan and I'm sure there will be a lot of snark and angst along the way but it will be worth it in the end. Your plot is falling into place very nicely and I can't wait to see what happens next!
OMG HALLELUJAH I KNEW MACHINA COULDN'T BE DEAD I KNEW IT! Ahh you totally just made my day and I love you for this and I love your story even more than I thought possible. I'm sorry you had to put up with all my fantasies but after reading the iron daughter I felt like there were so many loose ends and better possible endings. Now we can finally see the relationship develop between Machina and Meghan and I'm sure there will be a lot of snark and angst along the way but it will be worth it in the end. Your plot is falling into place very nicely and I can't wait to see what happens next!
4/12/2015 c15 Angie
Glad as always to see your updates! I'm glad we're seeing a little more of Ash, although now I'm intrigued to see whether Meghan will pick Ash or Tertius. The intervals with Machina are marvelous, even though it seems you've solidified his death (is it wrong that a teeny part of me still hopes he'll eventually be resurrected?) I'm just wondering if you plan to stick to the original plot or make your own storylines. Since you entitled your fanfic "A Different Ending," you might have a little more artistic license. For example, I've yet to see a fanfic where Rowan WASN'T evil, and maybe I'm just that kind of person who always roots for the bad guys, but I always thought Rowan got the short end of the stick (middle child, overlooked, etc) and he's more like a tortured soul, but he's got a chance at redemption-so maybe he doesn't have to die at the end and some girl will save him like Meghan did with Ash. Just food for thought, and I'm glad you find my reviews helpful :) I'll be anxiously awaiting your next update.
Glad as always to see your updates! I'm glad we're seeing a little more of Ash, although now I'm intrigued to see whether Meghan will pick Ash or Tertius. The intervals with Machina are marvelous, even though it seems you've solidified his death (is it wrong that a teeny part of me still hopes he'll eventually be resurrected?) I'm just wondering if you plan to stick to the original plot or make your own storylines. Since you entitled your fanfic "A Different Ending," you might have a little more artistic license. For example, I've yet to see a fanfic where Rowan WASN'T evil, and maybe I'm just that kind of person who always roots for the bad guys, but I always thought Rowan got the short end of the stick (middle child, overlooked, etc) and he's more like a tortured soul, but he's got a chance at redemption-so maybe he doesn't have to die at the end and some girl will save him like Meghan did with Ash. Just food for thought, and I'm glad you find my reviews helpful :) I'll be anxiously awaiting your next update.
4/12/2015 c15 WolfieLiker
Gosh, I just started to read this fanfic today and i'm already sooooo hooked! I love it to death! I hope you upload the next chapter soon :)
Gosh, I just started to read this fanfic today and i'm already sooooo hooked! I love it to death! I hope you upload the next chapter soon :)
4/9/2015 c15 NoIDontPostAnyStories
This is great! Your grammar is nice and I am so glad to hear back from you. I like the development with Machina. ;)
This is great! Your grammar is nice and I am so glad to hear back from you. I like the development with Machina. ;)
4/8/2015 c1 Guest
I enjoyed reading the first story of your fanficton and let me tell you it was amazing, I couldn't stop reading it, I had to stay up and finish just one more chapter which soon turned into three. You have done a very nice job and making it feel as if Julie herself wrote it, I love it...update soon I'm very anxious as to what will come next, I am very much of a shipper of Meghan and Machina. And I hope that he is not actually dead, but whatever you have in mind, I know will be great too. Nice job, keep up the great work! I'm dying to know what happens in next chapters! :)
I enjoyed reading the first story of your fanficton and let me tell you it was amazing, I couldn't stop reading it, I had to stay up and finish just one more chapter which soon turned into three. You have done a very nice job and making it feel as if Julie herself wrote it, I love it...update soon I'm very anxious as to what will come next, I am very much of a shipper of Meghan and Machina. And I hope that he is not actually dead, but whatever you have in mind, I know will be great too. Nice job, keep up the great work! I'm dying to know what happens in next chapters! :)
3/23/2015 c14 Lava
I can't take it QAQ
I can't take it QAQ
3/23/2015 c13 Lava
...are u serious...-staying speechless and crying until u tell me Machina is still fudging alive and will end up with Meghan-
...are u serious...-staying speechless and crying until u tell me Machina is still fudging alive and will end up with Meghan-
3/20/2015 c13 Angie
Gahh so glad you're doing regular updates so I don't have to be waiting in suspense for the next chapter. I feel like your writing has grown so much since the start of the story, and you've really gotten the feel of Julie Kagawa's style and you're making the story your own. I feel like I say this every review, but I hope you didn't really kill Machina off, because him and Meghan really deserve a resolution. You built up so much suspense in their relationship and I'm waiting for all these secrets to be revealed. Can't wait to read book two!
Gahh so glad you're doing regular updates so I don't have to be waiting in suspense for the next chapter. I feel like your writing has grown so much since the start of the story, and you've really gotten the feel of Julie Kagawa's style and you're making the story your own. I feel like I say this every review, but I hope you didn't really kill Machina off, because him and Meghan really deserve a resolution. You built up so much suspense in their relationship and I'm waiting for all these secrets to be revealed. Can't wait to read book two!
3/15/2015 c1 NoIDontPostAnyStories
This is amazing. Your grammar and plot is getting better and this scene tore at my heart. If this is Tertius x Meghan PLEASE write some Meghan x Machina on the side. (Your last scene was hot) Anyway, keep up the great work! I can't wait for the next chapters!
This is amazing. Your grammar and plot is getting better and this scene tore at my heart. If this is Tertius x Meghan PLEASE write some Meghan x Machina on the side. (Your last scene was hot) Anyway, keep up the great work! I can't wait for the next chapters!
3/14/2015 c13 Angie
What are you doing to my heart?! Please tell me he's not really dead-Machina has to be smarter than that. Or at least give us an alternate ending to your alternate ending where Machina and Meghan are happy together, because I sorely need some smut after all the angst in that chapter. Of course I'll continue to read this fic because I love ur writing but it won't be the same without Machina! :'( glad to see that you're planning another book though! Can't wait to read more of your writing.
What are you doing to my heart?! Please tell me he's not really dead-Machina has to be smarter than that. Or at least give us an alternate ending to your alternate ending where Machina and Meghan are happy together, because I sorely need some smut after all the angst in that chapter. Of course I'll continue to read this fic because I love ur writing but it won't be the same without Machina! :'( glad to see that you're planning another book though! Can't wait to read more of your writing.
3/6/2015 c12 12cheraichan
Very good story basis and I keep waiting for the culmination of all that hate, not hate between Meghan and Machina. Very much a shipper of that coupling and I can barely contain myself waiting for it to happen. The way you have changed how things have gone has been subtle and still almost follows along with what was happening in the actual books and it's a nice tie in for this AU. It broke my heart just a little to have Glitch die, though the loss of him gave Meghan a look at Machina as actually being able to feel. Can't wait to see what you have in store for us in the next chapter
12cheraichanVery good story basis and I keep waiting for the culmination of all that hate, not hate between Meghan and Machina. Very much a shipper of that coupling and I can barely contain myself waiting for it to happen. The way you have changed how things have gone has been subtle and still almost follows along with what was happening in the actual books and it's a nice tie in for this AU. It broke my heart just a little to have Glitch die, though the loss of him gave Meghan a look at Machina as actually being able to feel. Can't wait to see what you have in store for us in the next chapter