for A Different Ending3/3/2015 c12 Guest
Please please please please please update!
Please please please please please update!
2/28/2015 c12 Guest
Next chapter plz
Next chapter plz
2/19/2015 c12 Lava
! Wow just...wow...Glitch...-forever cries- and just...this is getting...wow lol I really wanted Meghan to, in some way, comfort Machina hehe and well this is just amazing :) ur amazing and ur writing is amazing and this fanfic is amazing and just wow hahaha can't wait for what's to come :D though I'm still wishing for a MeghanxMachina ending v
! Wow just...wow...Glitch...-forever cries- and just...this is getting...wow lol I really wanted Meghan to, in some way, comfort Machina hehe and well this is just amazing :) ur amazing and ur writing is amazing and this fanfic is amazing and just wow hahaha can't wait for what's to come :D though I'm still wishing for a MeghanxMachina ending v
2/13/2015 c12 Angie
Yes more Machina scenes! I love all your Meghan-Machina interactions-there's so much tension between them it just makes me wanna see them get together! You literally made my day when I saw you updated! I'm so glad you've decided to make Machina not so much of a villain (and that deleted scene was just what I needed :) ) and I hope you explore their relationship further because I think machina is such a wonderfully complex character. I was ecstatic to see that there's still so much of the story left and that you're continuing into the next book in the series! Keep up the great work and I eagerly await your next update!
Yes more Machina scenes! I love all your Meghan-Machina interactions-there's so much tension between them it just makes me wanna see them get together! You literally made my day when I saw you updated! I'm so glad you've decided to make Machina not so much of a villain (and that deleted scene was just what I needed :) ) and I hope you explore their relationship further because I think machina is such a wonderfully complex character. I was ecstatic to see that there's still so much of the story left and that you're continuing into the next book in the series! Keep up the great work and I eagerly await your next update!
1/26/2015 c11 Lava
Okay sooooo...this fanfiction is a ship between Tertius and Meghan? Not MACHINA and Meghan? I like Tertius and all and originally I love Ash and Meghan together so I really won't like if Tertius ends up with Meghan when initially I thought she would fall for Machina and have this complex love with the enemy since the title of this fanfic states that it's a different ending...get me? Or am I jumping to wrong conclusions? No insult intended since I really love how you have made this fanfic seem so real as if this is the way it was gonna go and for some reason (since I'm rooting for Meghan and Machina soooooo badly in this fanfic) ever since you brought up Machina before he became King and Meghan seeing this side of him (as a child being cheerful and full of laughter), I keep thinking that a scene where Meghan just randomly goes up to Machina and cups his cheeks to force a smile on his face, making him first be schocked at her touch and then just make bored eyes while she still has the corners of his lips upwards, making her laugh so hard at how funny his face looks would be quite cute :3 Machina would just conclude that Meghan drank that liquid again though I'm still thinking what he would do haha Anyways even if this ends up being a Tertius x Meghan ending -forever cries- I'll look forward for how it will end
Okay sooooo...this fanfiction is a ship between Tertius and Meghan? Not MACHINA and Meghan? I like Tertius and all and originally I love Ash and Meghan together so I really won't like if Tertius ends up with Meghan when initially I thought she would fall for Machina and have this complex love with the enemy since the title of this fanfic states that it's a different ending...get me? Or am I jumping to wrong conclusions? No insult intended since I really love how you have made this fanfic seem so real as if this is the way it was gonna go and for some reason (since I'm rooting for Meghan and Machina soooooo badly in this fanfic) ever since you brought up Machina before he became King and Meghan seeing this side of him (as a child being cheerful and full of laughter), I keep thinking that a scene where Meghan just randomly goes up to Machina and cups his cheeks to force a smile on his face, making him first be schocked at her touch and then just make bored eyes while she still has the corners of his lips upwards, making her laugh so hard at how funny his face looks would be quite cute :3 Machina would just conclude that Meghan drank that liquid again though I'm still thinking what he would do haha Anyways even if this ends up being a Tertius x Meghan ending -forever cries- I'll look forward for how it will end
1/18/2015 c3 Guest
I now imagine Machina as Jareth's little brother. For that, I thank you.
I now imagine Machina as Jareth's little brother. For that, I thank you.
1/16/2015 c11 Angie
I AM SO GLAD YOU UPDATED! I was so sad thinking that you'd abandoned this story but thank you so much for continuing it. I'm kind of sad this is the way you chose to go, though. I loved this story because it made Machina seem human, what with the loss of his sister and all that. I think of Machina like a wounded soul, not so much as the evil heartless killer you made him sound like in this chapter. You made me a Machina and Megan shipper, and I hope you at least resolve that (I honestly don't think Machina is that bad and deserves Tertius' hatred that much.) Im guessing you decided to go with Megan and Tertius, but please give is a little more on Machina, because hes my favorite character because you made him so complex and angsty. Those are just my thoughts (and wishful thinking) but regardless, I love your story and hope you update again soon!
I AM SO GLAD YOU UPDATED! I was so sad thinking that you'd abandoned this story but thank you so much for continuing it. I'm kind of sad this is the way you chose to go, though. I loved this story because it made Machina seem human, what with the loss of his sister and all that. I think of Machina like a wounded soul, not so much as the evil heartless killer you made him sound like in this chapter. You made me a Machina and Megan shipper, and I hope you at least resolve that (I honestly don't think Machina is that bad and deserves Tertius' hatred that much.) Im guessing you decided to go with Megan and Tertius, but please give is a little more on Machina, because hes my favorite character because you made him so complex and angsty. Those are just my thoughts (and wishful thinking) but regardless, I love your story and hope you update again soon!
10/24/2014 c10 Guest
Oh, and by the way, earlier you mentioned that you had some oneshots or Machina and Meghan. Would love to see some of those! ;) You've managed to make the chemistry between those two irresistible!
Oh, and by the way, earlier you mentioned that you had some oneshots or Machina and Meghan. Would love to see some of those! ;) You've managed to make the chemistry between those two irresistible!
10/24/2014 c10 Guest
Pleeeeereaaase update! This has to be one of the best fanfics on this site. I have to see more of Machina and Meghan, and I wonder what will happen now that Tertius is back. It's been so long since you've last updated I hope you haven't given up on this story because it's amazing!
Pleeeeereaaase update! This has to be one of the best fanfics on this site. I have to see more of Machina and Meghan, and I wonder what will happen now that Tertius is back. It's been so long since you've last updated I hope you haven't given up on this story because it's amazing!
5/17/2014 c10 Guest
This is the best fanfiction I haven EVER read. I mean, seriously. At the end of this chapter I was all like, SHIT DID THE DOWNLOAD STOP FOR THE IRON DAUGHTER IN IBOOKS? And then I was all like, oh, yeah, this is a fanfiction. Then, I felt really empty inside because it didn't continue. I'm over here just crying my eye sockets out. THIS IS UNBELIEVEABLY GOOD. LIKE, I COULD NOT TELL THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN THE IRON KING AND THIS FANFIC. this is a top-notch, quality fanfic, and those are rare as fuck to find. It's like a red fucking diamond in a pile of stone. Anyway, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE! I really, really, really, love this fanfic. I read all of it just now. I literally could not stop. You are a very talented writer, like, you can publish this shit and I bet you'll become the next JK Rowling. AHHHHHHHHHHH CLIFF HANGER. WHY DID YOU HAVE TO DO THIS TO MY SOUL? Lol, but, seriously, please continue this story. I'll be checking every day, 3 times a day, to see if you updated. Also, just a suggestion, but I would totally like to see more romance. Puck and Tertius are so cute. I just can't. ️️️ Please continue oh, holy one.
This is the best fanfiction I haven EVER read. I mean, seriously. At the end of this chapter I was all like, SHIT DID THE DOWNLOAD STOP FOR THE IRON DAUGHTER IN IBOOKS? And then I was all like, oh, yeah, this is a fanfiction. Then, I felt really empty inside because it didn't continue. I'm over here just crying my eye sockets out. THIS IS UNBELIEVEABLY GOOD. LIKE, I COULD NOT TELL THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN THE IRON KING AND THIS FANFIC. this is a top-notch, quality fanfic, and those are rare as fuck to find. It's like a red fucking diamond in a pile of stone. Anyway, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE! I really, really, really, love this fanfic. I read all of it just now. I literally could not stop. You are a very talented writer, like, you can publish this shit and I bet you'll become the next JK Rowling. AHHHHHHHHHHH CLIFF HANGER. WHY DID YOU HAVE TO DO THIS TO MY SOUL? Lol, but, seriously, please continue this story. I'll be checking every day, 3 times a day, to see if you updated. Also, just a suggestion, but I would totally like to see more romance. Puck and Tertius are so cute. I just can't. ️️️ Please continue oh, holy one.
4/16/2014 c10 
7M.C.Denalde
I'm new to this story but I loooove it! Please update soon and if my vote counts for anything Id say Meagan and Machina kissing would be fantastic :P
7M.C.DenaldeI'm new to this story but I loooove it! Please update soon and if my vote counts for anything Id say Meagan and Machina kissing would be fantastic :P
3/25/2014 c10 weepingangel12
Yay...
You updated whoop whoop
Your doing great, i cant wait to read the rest. Super excited that Tetris is back x)
Yay...
You updated whoop whoop
Your doing great, i cant wait to read the rest. Super excited that Tetris is back x)
3/17/2014 c10 Hannah
Yola! I really like your story! If you could, I really want for you to make Meghan and Puck together or if not, Meghan and Tertius would be good to! Hehe, well, I really have to do my homework now. Bye-bye!
p.s.-my username if I were logged in would be cheesenacho. Adios!
Yola! I really like your story! If you could, I really want for you to make Meghan and Puck together or if not, Meghan and Tertius would be good to! Hehe, well, I really have to do my homework now. Bye-bye!
p.s.-my username if I were logged in would be cheesenacho. Adios!
3/16/2014 c10 4Nerosiin X
You have a main grammatical error, the inability to differentiate between 'your' and 'you're'. 'Your' is used in the context of possession and 'you're' is a conjunction for 'you are'. However, I greatly enjoyed reading this. It was written to the style Julie Kagawa. Good job, and au revoir.
4Nerosiin XYou have a main grammatical error, the inability to differentiate between 'your' and 'you're'. 'Your' is used in the context of possession and 'you're' is a conjunction for 'you are'. However, I greatly enjoyed reading this. It was written to the style Julie Kagawa. Good job, and au revoir.
3/15/2014 c4 Hannah
It's really good! I like how you made the plot. Are you going to make Tertius and Meghan fall in love or something? I don't know. haha, good luck!
It's really good! I like how you made the plot. Are you going to make Tertius and Meghan fall in love or something? I don't know. haha, good luck!