for Yoite's Thoughts8/9/2011 c1 
13Eternally Fallen Love
I really like your stories! They are so emotional and moves the heart!
13Eternally Fallen LoveI really like your stories! They are so emotional and moves the heart!
7/18/2011 c1 2MurasakiNoNiwa
Wow, I’m really impressed by this one shot! Getting into Yoite’s head is kind of risky in my opinion, because he’s a quite vague character and full of surprises. But you really did a great job!
Yoite has a special way of thinking, also he’s quite egoistic, but he does have his reasons for this. The last line, about disappearing being painful, was a great twist at the end and it also strengthened the feelings you depicted throughout the story. I loved it!
Thank you for this beautiful and accurate insight on Yoite!
2MurasakiNoNiwaWow, I’m really impressed by this one shot! Getting into Yoite’s head is kind of risky in my opinion, because he’s a quite vague character and full of surprises. But you really did a great job!
Yoite has a special way of thinking, also he’s quite egoistic, but he does have his reasons for this. The last line, about disappearing being painful, was a great twist at the end and it also strengthened the feelings you depicted throughout the story. I loved it!
Thank you for this beautiful and accurate insight on Yoite!
5/6/2011 c1 Guest
This was a good oneshot i really liked it!
This was a good oneshot i really liked it!
5/4/2011 c1 Doradu93
Oh, dear.
That's wonderful, I think you really figured out his feelings, and you transcribed it in a beautiful way~
Oh, dear.
That's wonderful, I think you really figured out his feelings, and you transcribed it in a beautiful way~