for The Mallrats have to live again Season 68/9/2016 c3 Guest
He said he wanted her dead
He said he wanted her dead
6/28/2016 c3 Guest
I like it update soon
I like it update soon
6/11/2011 c2 
2Sladony
Thanks for all you comments I try my best but I'm back at school and I need some more ideas so please send me some emails and tell me some excellent ideas for the next chapters to come
2SladonyThanks for all you comments I try my best but I'm back at school and I need some more ideas so please send me some emails and tell me some excellent ideas for the next chapters to come
5/29/2011 c1 ClondPats42
Its ok, but your eps seem to be moving too fast. Try to explain a bit about the location.
Its ok, but your eps seem to be moving too fast. Try to explain a bit about the location.
5/14/2011 c2 Ebony17pandc
I love how this chapter is more detailed you def took you time to write it, wonderful work can't wait to see why the big G is after ebony and what will come of it
I love how this chapter is more detailed you def took you time to write it, wonderful work can't wait to see why the big G is after ebony and what will come of it
5/14/2011 c2 angel
fantastic chapter and in the next one could you make ved a jealous of Paul cause cloe and patsy give him more attention update soon
fantastic chapter and in the next one could you make ved a jealous of Paul cause cloe and patsy give him more attention update soon
5/14/2011 c2 princess
great chapter please update
great chapter please update
5/12/2011 c1 Ebony17pandc
I totally hope there is more to come! I love fanfics about Ebony and Slade and ill be looking for more, love the length of the chapter and all the characters too wonderful writing
I totally hope there is more to come! I love fanfics about Ebony and Slade and ill be looking for more, love the length of the chapter and all the characters too wonderful writing
5/4/2011 c1 2citable
The idea of you story is good but everything is kind of jumbled up and moving kind of too quick. I think it might help if you added settings to let on where stuff is taking place because the scenes melt together, at some points you tell there was a scene change but it's not really obvious.
2citableThe idea of you story is good but everything is kind of jumbled up and moving kind of too quick. I think it might help if you added settings to let on where stuff is taking place because the scenes melt together, at some points you tell there was a scene change but it's not really obvious.
5/4/2011 c1 Guest
Love it!
Love it!