
5/11/2011 c4 Finchel lova
Great story! But please keep on adding more chapters! And tell us more about Lilly!
Don't forget your promise. I reviewed, you need to add more chapies! :-D
Great story! But please keep on adding more chapters! And tell us more about Lilly!
Don't forget your promise. I reviewed, you need to add more chapies! :-D
5/10/2011 c4
56Sinfully Sined
This sounds great so far and I can't wait to see what you do with this. Short chapters just mean they flow faster. Although most of my chapters are over three thousand words most of the time. That is when I write. Right now I'm just a fan (cause I'm in the middle of writing a real book) and yours is one I will be looking forward to reading more of. Luv Sin!

This sounds great so far and I can't wait to see what you do with this. Short chapters just mean they flow faster. Although most of my chapters are over three thousand words most of the time. That is when I write. Right now I'm just a fan (cause I'm in the middle of writing a real book) and yours is one I will be looking forward to reading more of. Luv Sin!