for When It's Over10/13/2014 c9 
19mlw217
This whole story was pretty wonderful. It was well-written and held true to the characters. I usually don't like to read pairings but the way you wrote it really worked. I loved how you chronicled her transition back into her life...I felt like we missed that part in the show. It had to have been really difficult to come back from being in hiding. So good job! I really enjoyed reading it!
19mlw217This whole story was pretty wonderful. It was well-written and held true to the characters. I usually don't like to read pairings but the way you wrote it really worked. I loved how you chronicled her transition back into her life...I felt like we missed that part in the show. It had to have been really difficult to come back from being in hiding. So good job! I really enjoyed reading it!
7/30/2014 c9 Sera
I just discovered this story and loved every word of it. Thank you so very much. I didn't want it to end.
I just discovered this story and loved every word of it. Thank you so very much. I didn't want it to end.
7/30/2014 c9 Guest
Wonderful! Lovely! Thank You So Much!
Wonderful! Lovely! Thank You So Much!
7/28/2014 c9 ann
oh how did he do the proposal? pls update us. nice story btw
oh how did he do the proposal? pls update us. nice story btw
7/27/2014 c8 natalie in boston
This is such a great story; well written, intelligent, humorous, sweet, intriguing and true to character. Was so bummed when I went to press the "next" button to continue to the next chapter and there wasn't one! I hope you will consider completing it. I know we all know where it likely goes but reading your version of the journey has been really enjoyable!
This is such a great story; well written, intelligent, humorous, sweet, intriguing and true to character. Was so bummed when I went to press the "next" button to continue to the next chapter and there wasn't one! I hope you will consider completing it. I know we all know where it likely goes but reading your version of the journey has been really enjoyable!
7/4/2014 c8 River
I've really enjoyed reading this story, so I'm disappointed there's no ending to it...at least not yet. Could you please come back to this story and add an additional chapter or two so it's finished? It's a great story, but it would be great to include the scene between Hotch and Prentiss that the whole story has been leading up to, namely, one with him asking her out, but maybe also including little things like her deciding what she's doing for work now as well.
I've really enjoyed reading this story, so I'm disappointed there's no ending to it...at least not yet. Could you please come back to this story and add an additional chapter or two so it's finished? It's a great story, but it would be great to include the scene between Hotch and Prentiss that the whole story has been leading up to, namely, one with him asking her out, but maybe also including little things like her deciding what she's doing for work now as well.
6/30/2014 c4 rmpcmfan
Just reading this story and found this chapter to be very emotional. So well done.
Just reading this story and found this chapter to be very emotional. So well done.
6/13/2011 c8 Loved it
Sorry I'm on my iPod so I can't log in, but this will be added to my FAVs when I'm
On the pc :L (I ws also the one who reviewed about loosing the game xD)
I love this story, in the words of Laura smith...(me) grab a bush and shag in it... Boom tension gone :L
Sorry I'm on my iPod so I can't log in, but this will be added to my FAVs when I'm
On the pc :L (I ws also the one who reviewed about loosing the game xD)
I love this story, in the words of Laura smith...(me) grab a bush and shag in it... Boom tension gone :L
6/13/2011 c7 All I could think of is
HOW I LOST THE GAME! xD
HOW I LOST THE GAME! xD