12/18/2011 c8 Shara Raizel
so KID is just a persona for kaito's magician career and not a thief... interesting.
so KID is just a persona for kaito's magician career and not a thief... interesting.
12/18/2011 c7 Shara Raizel
so kaito inadvertently became shinichi's double. XD i think i might have done the same as yusaku though.
so kaito inadvertently became shinichi's double. XD i think i might have done the same as yusaku though.
12/18/2011 c6 Shara Raizel
aww! so cute! i really do like these childhood-baby moments. their so cute and fun to read! XD i imagine the toichi got chewed up ALOT by chikage. XD i'm just waiting for an embarrassing moment for kaito to come along now. XD that or another adorable baby moment.
aww! so cute! i really do like these childhood-baby moments. their so cute and fun to read! XD i imagine the toichi got chewed up ALOT by chikage. XD i'm just waiting for an embarrassing moment for kaito to come along now. XD that or another adorable baby moment.
12/18/2011 c5 Shara Raizel
XD all these are making me smile and laugh! this one was really good! shinichi forced crossdress! XD LOVE IT!
XD all these are making me smile and laugh! this one was really good! shinichi forced crossdress! XD LOVE IT!
12/18/2011 c4 Shara Raizel
XD OMG! i love yuikiko! XD poor shin-chan! i wonder how long the silly mother had stood underneath the tree before the boys came down... :D
XD OMG! i love yuikiko! XD poor shin-chan! i wonder how long the silly mother had stood underneath the tree before the boys came down... :D
12/18/2011 c3 Shara Raizel
oh well. at least nothing too embarrassing happened to poor shinichi. I kinda would have like to know what kaito thought about dancing with shinichi.
oh well. at least nothing too embarrassing happened to poor shinichi. I kinda would have like to know what kaito thought about dancing with shinichi.
12/18/2011 c2 Shara Raizel
awww! cute! XD poor shinichi. XD i still have a blanket that i used to curl up in when i was little.
awww! cute! XD poor shinichi. XD i still have a blanket that i used to curl up in when i was little.
12/18/2011 c1 Shara Raizel
XD i love it! I probably would have laughed if i were in kaito's place as well. XD
XD i love it! I probably would have laughed if i were in kaito's place as well. XD
12/1/2011 c16 3TangerineTea
These are just too cute for words ^^ One little quibble, though-maybe it would be better to break up the story a bit soon to insert the arrival of the guests and the party and all that, because the thought that they could come in at any time is sort of distracting, even though the memories themselves are engrossing. They could just as easily pick up again afterwards, or others at the party could bring up or trigger other memories, or insist that Kaito and Shinichi show them the album...
These are just too cute for words ^^ One little quibble, though-maybe it would be better to break up the story a bit soon to insert the arrival of the guests and the party and all that, because the thought that they could come in at any time is sort of distracting, even though the memories themselves are engrossing. They could just as easily pick up again afterwards, or others at the party could bring up or trigger other memories, or insist that Kaito and Shinichi show them the album...
10/23/2011 c11 16moved to aceoftwos
I'm just now starting to wonder... what happened to Ran, Aoko, Conan and the rest of them in this story? Do they just... not exist or something?
I'm just now starting to wonder... what happened to Ran, Aoko, Conan and the rest of them in this story? Do they just... not exist or something?
10/23/2011 c16 Oreo13
haha
can't wait for the next picture story!
haha
can't wait for the next picture story!
10/20/2011 c16 Justice Cookie
Another great installment lol I live your writing :3 makes me smile! The image of kaito shaking Shinichi around desperately trying to convince him had me snickering. Poor Kaito :3 I'd have burnt it as well!
Hah! We were on the same wavelength? Too funny!
Good luck with your move! Stay safe! Oh and if you ever need or want someone to beta or bounce ideas off? I'm putting my hand up :)
Thanks for sharing!
Another great installment lol I live your writing :3 makes me smile! The image of kaito shaking Shinichi around desperately trying to convince him had me snickering. Poor Kaito :3 I'd have burnt it as well!
Hah! We were on the same wavelength? Too funny!
Good luck with your move! Stay safe! Oh and if you ever need or want someone to beta or bounce ideas off? I'm putting my hand up :)
Thanks for sharing!
10/11/2011 c15 Sternenstaub
Now, that's a very nice and apt way to write about one of my favourite couples. :D Just the way I like it! Thank you very much! I just hope that you'll add some new chapters soon, for you seem to have been inactive for a while now... I hope it's not due to some kind of nasty writer's block. :-/
As to further ideas: I would have recommended the same ones as Nightpounce. :) I think they have the potential to yield long chapters.
All the best to you!
Sternenstaub
Now, that's a very nice and apt way to write about one of my favourite couples. :D Just the way I like it! Thank you very much! I just hope that you'll add some new chapters soon, for you seem to have been inactive for a while now... I hope it's not due to some kind of nasty writer's block. :-/
As to further ideas: I would have recommended the same ones as Nightpounce. :) I think they have the potential to yield long chapters.
All the best to you!
Sternenstaub