for Hindsight Is Not Perfect3/11 c2 Lot1t
I like the way it's written, but I don't like the way it's written. The hero is a whiner and an imbecile, and acts exactly according to this characteristic.
I like the way it's written, but I don't like the way it's written. The hero is a whiner and an imbecile, and acts exactly according to this characteristic.
3/5 c1 zaniarein247
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2/6 c13 tenshiruin
Awesome story! What a trip! It was funny, easy to get emotionally invested in, and hard to put down!
Thank you for writing and posting it here.
T
Awesome story! What a trip! It was funny, easy to get emotionally invested in, and hard to put down!
Thank you for writing and posting it here.
T
6/21/2024 c13 Hyperman15
Im glad i found this series, i mistakenly started with part 2 and i got halfway before finding out about the first one
Im glad i found this series, i mistakenly started with part 2 and i got halfway before finding out about the first one
12/14/2023 c10 CC HALP
It's a helluva thing when one of the most powerful force-users ever, with decades worth of battles and experiences forgets he can, you know, use the force.
"W-who a-are you?"
"Mesa Jar-Jar..." fumbles lightsaber. "Whoopsie. Binks."
And the irony of the chapter being titled 'Failure', when it's not Anakin's failure, but instead the writer's use of author-fiat.
Tsk
And the next chapter... Well, forewarned is forearmed must not be a thing in a galaxy far, far, away.
It's a helluva thing when one of the most powerful force-users ever, with decades worth of battles and experiences forgets he can, you know, use the force.
"W-who a-are you?"
"Mesa Jar-Jar..." fumbles lightsaber. "Whoopsie. Binks."
And the irony of the chapter being titled 'Failure', when it's not Anakin's failure, but instead the writer's use of author-fiat.
Tsk
And the next chapter... Well, forewarned is forearmed must not be a thing in a galaxy far, far, away.
12/12/2023 c5 
7TheButterflyComposer
she would have to appoint a meeting...that makes me feel a little wrong, though it may be correct. She would have to make an appointment with him? idk...
7TheButterflyComposershe would have to appoint a meeting...that makes me feel a little wrong, though it may be correct. She would have to make an appointment with him? idk...
11/10/2023 c5 Axccel
I never understood why someone raised in politics like Padme would do something so stupid as issue a vote of no-confidence merely because the Chancellor was following the law. What did she think would happen? That his replacement would magically be able to ignore the legal procedures? There was no way in which it could help her and she knew it.
She also seems, both in the movies and in this, incapable of understanding that things don't just instantly happen just because she wants it.
I never understood why someone raised in politics like Padme would do something so stupid as issue a vote of no-confidence merely because the Chancellor was following the law. What did she think would happen? That his replacement would magically be able to ignore the legal procedures? There was no way in which it could help her and she knew it.
She also seems, both in the movies and in this, incapable of understanding that things don't just instantly happen just because she wants it.
11/10/2023 c4 Axccel
Pfft, his anger towards Obi-Wan is stupid.
Anakin: "I'm angry and hateful to Obi-Wan!"
Obi-Wan: "Why?"
Anakin: "...I dunno, the writer said so, I guess? I mean, you never did anything bad to me or hurt me in any way, shape, or form until Mustafar and I reeeeally deserved it and worse by then. And all of my pain came entirely from my obsession and greed."
As for Obi-Wan's aging thing, personally my head-canon is that he used the Force extensively to shield Luke from being detected and that the strain decayed his body.
And I never understood the betrayal thing both in the lore and in fanfics. What betrayal? That he didn't side with Anakin? It's not clear and doesn't make sense. The word "betrayal" doesn't fit into anything that happened after Order 66 in regards to anyone but Anakin. And in this story, Anakin knows damn well that Obi-Wan's actions couldn't have been betrayal anyway, that he was simply chasing after the REAL traitor: him. Heck, he should HOPE Padme ratted him out.
Pfft, his anger towards Obi-Wan is stupid.
Anakin: "I'm angry and hateful to Obi-Wan!"
Obi-Wan: "Why?"
Anakin: "...I dunno, the writer said so, I guess? I mean, you never did anything bad to me or hurt me in any way, shape, or form until Mustafar and I reeeeally deserved it and worse by then. And all of my pain came entirely from my obsession and greed."
As for Obi-Wan's aging thing, personally my head-canon is that he used the Force extensively to shield Luke from being detected and that the strain decayed his body.
And I never understood the betrayal thing both in the lore and in fanfics. What betrayal? That he didn't side with Anakin? It's not clear and doesn't make sense. The word "betrayal" doesn't fit into anything that happened after Order 66 in regards to anyone but Anakin. And in this story, Anakin knows damn well that Obi-Wan's actions couldn't have been betrayal anyway, that he was simply chasing after the REAL traitor: him. Heck, he should HOPE Padme ratted him out.
8/10/2023 c6 Efail
I get that he's a big ol ball of emotional mess right now and that 'logic was never his strong suit' but the sheer stupidity that is not trying to do something about Palpatine as soon as possible even at the possible risk of his own well being is so incredibly annoying that it's difficult to keep reading. He cares about Padme yet doesn't do sh*t to actually help her and sends her off to go have a chat with the sith lord that even he fears. Every second that he is in any amount of power is another second closer towards her death and pain. So why is he doing NOTHING to actually change that besides put her in even more danger? I understand it's in order to force the plot to have an element of intrigue but it just feels like intentionally making a character stupid in order to force an event to occur.
I get that he's a big ol ball of emotional mess right now and that 'logic was never his strong suit' but the sheer stupidity that is not trying to do something about Palpatine as soon as possible even at the possible risk of his own well being is so incredibly annoying that it's difficult to keep reading. He cares about Padme yet doesn't do sh*t to actually help her and sends her off to go have a chat with the sith lord that even he fears. Every second that he is in any amount of power is another second closer towards her death and pain. So why is he doing NOTHING to actually change that besides put her in even more danger? I understand it's in order to force the plot to have an element of intrigue but it just feels like intentionally making a character stupid in order to force an event to occur.
5/28/2023 c11 AlexianBlithworth
Huh, so again I read the same fic not realising at first and yet still I find the same issue that made me drop it.
How in all Nine Hells did you think it's good writing for a fic like this to make it look as if fate can't be altered by the very same reason you wrote the fic in the first place?
Huh, so again I read the same fic not realising at first and yet still I find the same issue that made me drop it.
How in all Nine Hells did you think it's good writing for a fic like this to make it look as if fate can't be altered by the very same reason you wrote the fic in the first place?
5/19/2023 c5 hallaba
some one commented on a future chapter this: "Interesting premise. Over done execution on the character.".
that is so true. he is supposed to be an old man in a younger body so obviously there is going to be mental problems but the whole damn book is all about that really. about anakins inner conflict, his weakness and the like.
some one commented on a future chapter this: "Interesting premise. Over done execution on the character.".
that is so true. he is supposed to be an old man in a younger body so obviously there is going to be mental problems but the whole damn book is all about that really. about anakins inner conflict, his weakness and the like.