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74Ariyah
I... kinda don't know what I just read. I mean, I do. But I don't. Peter Wiggin in Narnia is just so weird to me. But I do think you've kept him in character (I question the severity of his shock over the Witch's followers' post-battle behaviour, but I suppose even he may draw a line somewhere). Also surprised that he didn't seem all that bothered by Jadis finding out his last name. I do like how his analytical side comes out all over the place, from judging Jadis' fake smile to working with his subordinates' ways of life and nature.
Ariel_of_Narnia
74AriyahI... kinda don't know what I just read. I mean, I do. But I don't. Peter Wiggin in Narnia is just so weird to me. But I do think you've kept him in character (I question the severity of his shock over the Witch's followers' post-battle behaviour, but I suppose even he may draw a line somewhere). Also surprised that he didn't seem all that bothered by Jadis finding out his last name. I do like how his analytical side comes out all over the place, from judging Jadis' fake smile to working with his subordinates' ways of life and nature.
Ariel_of_Narnia
1/20/2018 c3 A
Holy crap! This is brilliant! Of course Peter would love the chance to play war.
Holy crap! This is brilliant! Of course Peter would love the chance to play war.
5/19/2017 c3 Guest
I was hoping Peter would be the White Witch's enemy, but this is good too. Unfortunately this looks like it has been discontinued... oh well...
I was hoping Peter would be the White Witch's enemy, but this is good too. Unfortunately this looks like it has been discontinued... oh well...
5/19/2017 c1 Guest
Hell yes... Peter is the kind of enemy the White Witch deserves...
Hell yes... Peter is the kind of enemy the White Witch deserves...
1/25/2016 c3 9Number Six-Sixtysix
Heh. I'm guessing Christian morality isn't going to be a message in this Narnia.
9Number Six-SixtysixHeh. I'm guessing Christian morality isn't going to be a message in this Narnia.
11/17/2015 c3 3Sue Clover
Well, this was fun. Is Ender somehow going to end up in charge of Aslan's forces, against Peter?
3Sue CloverWell, this was fun. Is Ender somehow going to end up in charge of Aslan's forces, against Peter?
5/18/2015 c2 mutecebu
Oh man, I never thought of the fantasy game as a bridge to Narnia! Given what we know of Jane in the Ender sequels, this is brilliant!
Also, summing up the whole fantasy game (for a while) with the question "ARE you a killer?" - that was a very astute observation.
Last chapter was an interesting concept. With this one, I'm hooked! I know you haven't published much fanfiction for a while, but I'm still glad you shared this.
Oh man, I never thought of the fantasy game as a bridge to Narnia! Given what we know of Jane in the Ender sequels, this is brilliant!
Also, summing up the whole fantasy game (for a while) with the question "ARE you a killer?" - that was a very astute observation.
Last chapter was an interesting concept. With this one, I'm hooked! I know you haven't published much fanfiction for a while, but I'm still glad you shared this.
5/18/2015 c1 mutecebu
This is a lot of fun. I like how you handled Peter. Val's barb about the squirrels was excellent.
This is a lot of fun. I like how you handled Peter. Val's barb about the squirrels was excellent.
9/12/2014 c3 Oh I am Slain
Just re-read this. Such a fun idea. Also reminds me a little bit of Saphroneth's Saruman of Many Devices, except with the added fun of Peter.
Just re-read this. Such a fun idea. Also reminds me a little bit of Saphroneth's Saruman of Many Devices, except with the added fun of Peter.
1/31/2014 c1 BFD
This concept is fantastic! (Literally, fantastical...) If Peter, Val, and Ender were transported to Narnia, their world would end. The whole idea of Peter, Susan, Edmund, and Lucy was that they were still children with the minds of adults (later, of course, AFTER they had been to Narnia and back), so this comparison is surprisingly similar. Of course, Card's Peter is far more warlike than Lewis' Peter, and it would be interesting to see how his character played out his role.
This concept is fantastic! (Literally, fantastical...) If Peter, Val, and Ender were transported to Narnia, their world would end. The whole idea of Peter, Susan, Edmund, and Lucy was that they were still children with the minds of adults (later, of course, AFTER they had been to Narnia and back), so this comparison is surprisingly similar. Of course, Card's Peter is far more warlike than Lewis' Peter, and it would be interesting to see how his character played out his role.
10/7/2012 c3 11Author37
Well done, very well done. I love how Peter can get under Jadis' skin so easily. It makes Peter more dangerous. Please have Valentine join Aslan. Maybe add Achilles.
11Author37Well done, very well done. I love how Peter can get under Jadis' skin so easily. It makes Peter more dangerous. Please have Valentine join Aslan. Maybe add Achilles.
9/26/2012 c2 Guest
Aooouuuuuuuuu. So cooool. Keep it up.
Aooouuuuuuuuu. So cooool. Keep it up.
9/25/2012 c2 Zach
I'm so glad I followed this! Thanks for updating I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes!
I'm so glad I followed this! Thanks for updating I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes!