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9/17/2011 c1 4cb.spica
Cute story xD I like the idea of the playing cards~

On a minor grammatical note, when there is a new speaker, there should be a new paragraph.

Example:

"What about you Jack? Do you like bananas?" the little girl asked.

"No," Jack replied.

Nice work~

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