for Harry & Lily Potter8/23/2020 c1 Guest
Love this. Update soon
Love this. Update soon
8/2/2016 c4 andjelija.nenic
Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$
Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$
12/31/2013 c9 Guest
a bientot
a bientot
4/4/2013 c3 
2OrphanAcc12
no offense, but how old are you? your 10 right? this is good work for a ten year old, better than some 15 year old i know, but you need a beta. id be okay to be your beta if you want? but over all its a great story, your writing style is unique although some parts did not make sense.
-abby
2OrphanAcc12no offense, but how old are you? your 10 right? this is good work for a ten year old, better than some 15 year old i know, but you need a beta. id be okay to be your beta if you want? but over all its a great story, your writing style is unique although some parts did not make sense.
-abby
7/23/2012 c7 4crazy1person2you3been4warned
Hi! I coughed up a lung! AHHHHH! It's pinkish . . . I got to stop laughing well I'm having trouble breathing keep writing and I'll probaly cough up another lung. PLEASE!
4crazy1person2you3been4warnedHi! I coughed up a lung! AHHHHH! It's pinkish . . . I got to stop laughing well I'm having trouble breathing keep writing and I'll probaly cough up another lung. PLEASE!
7/18/2011 c2 2TheTheatreFreak
This sucks, learn to write. Besides, Bella's already enough of a Mary-Sue without your little fantasy.
2TheTheatreFreakThis sucks, learn to write. Besides, Bella's already enough of a Mary-Sue without your little fantasy.