for Flicker8/7/2011 c1 charmed ravenclaw
I like the fact that the Zutara wasn't too pronounced in this one. It was a good speech Katara made and Zuko made a lot of good points that weren't addressed. Nicely done!
I like the fact that the Zutara wasn't too pronounced in this one. It was a good speech Katara made and Zuko made a lot of good points that weren't addressed. Nicely done!
5/13/2011 c1 
80Seph Meadowes
Well-written and I enjoy the way you portrayed Zuko, Katara and their relationship. Great job.
80Seph MeadowesWell-written and I enjoy the way you portrayed Zuko, Katara and their relationship. Great job.
5/13/2011 c1 1Maverick48
Love it!
It was so well written and poignant. You fully captured there characters so well in so little words! Bravo!
1Maverick48Love it!
It was so well written and poignant. You fully captured there characters so well in so little words! Bravo!
5/12/2011 c1 Topazera
I hadn't read any of this pairing in a long while but I felt in the mood and I'm glad I clicked! This was such a nice little interlude. It has a lot of what I find compelling about these two together, a sense of understanding even in disagreement. I really liked how hard-nosed you made Katara here, how she just couldn't let things lie. That seems very true to her. :) And Zuko, still seeing things in terms of personal responsibility and not being entirely wrong about that.
Thanks so much for sharing! There were some nice things to turn over in this and I enjoyed reading it a lot. :)
I hadn't read any of this pairing in a long while but I felt in the mood and I'm glad I clicked! This was such a nice little interlude. It has a lot of what I find compelling about these two together, a sense of understanding even in disagreement. I really liked how hard-nosed you made Katara here, how she just couldn't let things lie. That seems very true to her. :) And Zuko, still seeing things in terms of personal responsibility and not being entirely wrong about that.
Thanks so much for sharing! There were some nice things to turn over in this and I enjoyed reading it a lot. :)
5/12/2011 c1 1Ashra Blitzgeschwind
Wow, what a great little episode. And what a shame that it is that short. You have a very thrilling, clear and harmonic writing style. I love it. I now willl look if you wrote any other stories about the topic and hope to find some...otherwise please write more :D
1Ashra BlitzgeschwindWow, what a great little episode. And what a shame that it is that short. You have a very thrilling, clear and harmonic writing style. I love it. I now willl look if you wrote any other stories about the topic and hope to find some...otherwise please write more :D
5/12/2011 c1 121Kimberly T
This was indeed very angsty, and yet, reading it did give an overall feeling of hope, however slim, of better times ahead for both of them.
121Kimberly TThis was indeed very angsty, and yet, reading it did give an overall feeling of hope, however slim, of better times ahead for both of them.
5/12/2011 c1 10OncExUpoNxAxNightwisH
Wow... That was really good! I loved it! Well done, that was an awesome story. Keep up the good work :)
10OncExUpoNxAxNightwisHWow... That was really good! I loved it! Well done, that was an awesome story. Keep up the good work :)